Reviews for Different Beginnings |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 10/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just discovered that you were also the author of “In His Pocket”. I like your stories especially “The Honored One”. God bless! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story |
![]() ![]() ![]() They’re on to you Kabuto... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor kid... Poor Naruto... On dark, yet humorous note, I’d like to imagine Neji getting to the afterlife and suddenly realizing that he’s a big brother |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's an interesting story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg, ANBU DO NOT go around taking ppl their names while wearing the mask. unless he WASN'T wearing his mask and you weren't clear about that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't understand how I've now read two stories in a row that have Naruto opening declare to the world he is in fucking ANBU. I swear to God it's so frustrating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() fyi it's not doton chakra that puts them in the ground it is a doton jutsu. not a big deal either way though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to where you go with this. Curious who Kebi-inu is. As I thought only Uzumaki were capable of hosting the Kyuubi. Cheers, TCW |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story as well. I hope you continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story and I hope you will continue it. I was wondering if Naruto will gain his mom's chakra chains? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you were too stupid to finish this, so it isn't a surprise, but maybe learn how to pick one fucking tense. They teach this shit to fucking first graders. Learn to fucking NOT SWITCH TENSES MID FUCKING SENTENCE. |