I hope you get better soon and finish this, it is great!

hey don't sweat it. I write too, and i know how hard it can be. especially with mental issues. you work thru this at your own pace, and when you can, you come back and finish. But only when you can and want to. If I was logged into my own account i would have favorited and followed this story a long time ago, but sadly i can't for reasons I would rather not get into. anyway this is a ramble now, what I meant was u do u and you take care of you before you come back to finish this.

Oh come on! What isn't ingenious about Circumventing all the tasks by flying a fucking Dragon?
Clearly, if he failed, then they don't know what ingenuity is.

First; mrs. Oliver Quidditch! Lmao!
Second; they're start a club called the CDC. Lmfao!

Great story! I'm sorry you are going through such tough times. I think you should get in touch with Celran, not to ask for help as Beta, but maybe get together for tea, catch up with each other's life happenings. I'm sure he would love hearing from you.
Take the time you need to heal. We will all be here, ready to welcome you back with open arms. I really hope things get more manageable for you. Big hugs!

Awesome story! loving it!

So, I don’t normally post reviews, I’m much more of a lurker, but I felt compelled to write this one. I’ve read the first 24 chapters nearly nonstop, and I’ve had a smile on my face the whole time. It’s so refreshing to find a such a fanfic that is an absolute joy to read. Now, you may have sad chapters ahead, but I’m hopeful that Harry and his friends will come out on top. Also, I’m having a LOT more fun reading a Draco heavy story than I thought. It’s nice.

patience

nice, i like the idea of wizarding egypt still having a pharaoh

tournament

gawk

marauders
throw not through

what does " showering the vinegar off" mean?
is this a britishism?
was dean drenched in vinegar and how did he get that way?

colleagues

Sorry, Reticent does not mean silent, it means that they are not very forthcoming with their thoughts and feelings.
I'm loving your story so far, but my goodness do you need an editor to come through and clean things up. Should be an easy job just fixing up the misspelled names and words, since the story itself is otherwise well written.