Reviews for The Red Dragon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so far! The only thing that’s bugging me is that I find it hard to believe that so many students would follow Harry at this time, he’s 12. I can understand the study group with other 2nd and 1st years, I just don’t see 4-7th years following a 12 year old, even if Harry if mentally 21, he’s 12 in this timeline. Again I love this story, it has been becoming one of my favourites, I’m just confused with this one plot point. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your fanfiction story |
![]() ![]() Someone should adopt this story and put the final 24 chapters in. |
![]() ![]() Your age on Albus is way off at that time in Harrys life he would be around 140 nnot 115. You might wanna read the Harry Potter books. |
![]() ![]() 500 galleons would'nt be enough to start a joke shop. Try 25,000 have to buy products to sell and buy a building. Also pay for an extra employee Lee Jordan. |
![]() ![]() Heavens Pendant Is a pendant that will protect a female from any evil spell. It is useless for a male. Thats why Harry that it was non magical. |
![]() ![]() He healed her sore. Her heel of her foot got stuck in the door. |
![]() ![]() Fray is safe shes with me watching a Harry Potter Movie. |
![]() ![]() The girl was guiet as a mouse. It was guite a wonderful sight. |
![]() ![]() He speaks Parcel tounge because he is a decendant of the Peverell family and they can speak parceltounge. |
![]() ![]() You wrote waist instead of waste. |
![]() ![]() Albus is curious. |
![]() ![]() Oh my atom splinter.I gotta get my camera .This is awesome. |
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