Reviews for The Red Dragon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fair so far. I'm curious where it will go from here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, I really liked the fact that this is so different to the canon. And a Harry was awesome! And also, I'm holding onto the hope that it turns out to be a Dramione (when they are old enough). :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really would like to see more |
![]() ![]() Crucio. Avada kedavra. For spelling of spells check harry potter wiki |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job Tia! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Thanks for the update. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() With only the prologue, the story is not yet anything special but it could develop that way. You can write more details. With the same stuff happening, you can fill at least 500 words. Are there death eaters alive? Why does harry use the cricatus curse? Does he want tom to feel the pain he felt? There are endless possibilities. As a side note, I think you meant the spell "Avada Kedavra" |