You keep miss spelling Evans with evens

I really like your Fanfiction so far! I really like Draco and I was hoping that draco hairy could be friends. Although I’m one of the ones that actually likes the Draco and Harry is a couple. I’m glad you’re like snape and aren’t going to bash him. I think dumbledore is just got too much going on. He’s got too many jobs, and he simply has no idea, but not all families love each other. I think that the Dursley’s wouldn’t give a big fuss if Harry stayed with Mrs. figg and they didn’t tell anyone.
I don’t see Lucius Malfoy or Narcissa as bad people that’s the one thing I don’t like I’ll see them as struggling under parental pressure and under bad situations to try to keep your family safe. I think they love Draco I just think they don’t know how to be good parents good job keep up the good work I can’t wait to keep reading.

I know the last update is from around 2018, but just know that, assuming you are still around, some people can understand what you're going through. Take myself for instance. While I haven't been diagnosed by a doctor as having such, I'm pretty sure I have depression in some form or another, that comes and goes, and while I might not have the MAJOR mental health issues like you described, my mother, has been officially diagnosed with schizophrenia as many as 40 years ago, and I'm 36 years old, so, um, having seen her on practically every "crazy pill" known to man, while changing them every time they quit working, I can tell you how stressful it was just for me when I was a kid, and I imagine it was way worse for her, especially in the times where she "crashed" I guess you could call it... Not saying that you have those exact problems or even similar, but just know that you are not alone in your struggles...

Not currently logged in, but the given name is my username, just in case you find you need it for some reason, and when I DO log in, which I might do next, I will definitely follow this...

Now, as for a review of the story, the story itself is very good, but if this ever gets finished, which I hope DOES happen, then the first thing I'm going to do, if I download an Epub copy of this, specifically so I can get rid of those author notes skits and whatnot... If it works for you then fine, keep it up, but considering how short these chapters are, some of those notes and needless puns, take up half the chapter, or very near to it...

One thing I noticed, is that you keep saying you're dyslexic, and I'm not sure if this is just a byproduct of dyslexia or something different, but there's a bunch of times throughout the story where you write "defiantly" when, using the sentence structure and context, as well as the actual contents, it SHOULD be "definitely" instead. To be perfectly clear, there is NOTHING that I can find wrong with your writing in general, but getting that one word wrong constantly and consistently, just makes the story feel like you don't care about it, when you DO seem to appear to care about it overall. The issue with that, is that you can care about it, or not care about it, but you can't do both, or at least, not at the same time...

Another thing, is that if I was writing this story I would have consolidated some, if not half, of these chapters together as a lot of them feel a little short. In my opinion, this story could easily be combined down to probably at most 50-60 chapters, although that could increase if you ever decide to finish this story.

I sincerely hope that I wasn't too hard on you with this, as the story is truly magnificent, considering how divergent from canon it's starting to go in earnest...

Hi Tristan

I think I read some of your story in High School and lost it among the many when I’d reached its end.
Love this story and your writing.
Was great to re read and have some extra chapters.
I hope life settles down for you and that you get inspired to continue writing this story.

Just finished your story! I love it so much. Almost loved your banter at the beginning and end more than the short itself! I know it’s been several years but hopefully you’ve moved on to bigger and better things. Just wanted to let you know that your story brought me some joy. 3

I’m so happy to be reading this story. Snape is exactly how I hoped he was in the books.

Hi. I just wanted to say that i have been through what you're going through. I wouldnt wish it on my worst enemy and I'm sorry you have to deal with depression. I just wanted to say I'm here if you need someone to talk to. I hope you're doing well as it has been a few years since you've updated the story.

So good!

Reading this June 07/23. Just wanted to say, i dont know how long ago you first wrote this( im lousy at figuring that stuff out, im old,lol) but i just want to say i hope your sisterand yourself!are doing well.

Rereading this fic and loving it just as much the second time around!

I like all of it

It's kneazel btw ;))) nice chapter

This story was so well written! I think even JK Rowling would be impressed.

A story for the ages. I hope that you are doing well we’re ever you are

this has been an amazing story. I binged reading this to the end for your note. you have been amazing and I have loved the story and ask and beg you to continue. you do you and get better my friend we all wish and hope you. the best of luck and health. I will keep a weathered eye open for you and your stories.