| Reviews for Monochrome Duet |
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   Grimmideals chapter 34 . 7/16/2023 Ok so I love that you've depicted Hollow Realization's mess so well. Great story so far, been sitting in my library unread until last week due to some other fics I was catching up on and I'm glad I let it sit so I could binge to this point. One more chapter before I'm caught up! |
| Cha0sniper chapter 19 . 7/11/2023 THE GOOD SHIP KIRIMEL HAS FINALLY SET SAIL |
| Cha0sniper chapter 16 . 7/11/2023 For what it's worth, I think the more character-focused boss fight was very well executed, and enjoyable to read. Shame that your original idea didn't fully come together, but I think the end result was still good. |
| Cha0sniper chapter 12 . 7/11/2023 Honestly, most MMO boss strategies would be completely meaningless in SAO, because all other MMOs have dedicated healers and ranged DPS. They tend to boil down to not pointing the boss towards the raid, and not standing in the very obvious AoE markers when the boss abilities go off. Not super relevant to SAO bosses, so what you have here is fine (Heathcliff tanking the boss for so long solo is silly, but that's on canon, not you lol. We all know how he cheats) |
| Cha0sniper chapter 11 . 7/11/2023 Dammit, I'm apparently not allowed to post a review that's nothing but emojis. This is cultural insensitivity dammit |
| Cha0sniper chapter 10 . 7/11/2023 Congratulations, you made me sob like a baby at the ending. I knew it was coming, and it still got me |
| Datarus Finnigun chapter 35 . 6/30/2023 Just read the whole thing again, top to bottom, after a long while away, and all of it was as good and enjoyable as I remember. Thank you for the continued work! |
| The One True Nobody chapter 35 . 5/17/2023 Just a short review this time, but I'm enjoying this Hollow Area storyline. The game it comes from couldn't get halfway as deep into the concept of a hidden developer area as it wanted, partly because the writing was too focused on harem shenanigans, partly because of the presentation limits of a low-budget PSP title. But I'm definitely enjoying this take on it. Don't worry about exploring Philia's existential issues as deep as you wanted all at one time, though; there'll always be time to revisit it later, and the idea came through clearly enough as it is. Sometimes half of the strength of such things is in how the reader's imagination fills in what is not outright stated. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Destria Cosplay chapter 35 . 5/16/2023 Dropping a quick review while i was at work because i thought it already wrote one called it! baneblade becomes the dark repulser! |
| TheBleachDoctor chapter 35 . 5/13/2023 Caught up to the latest chapter. God, I love this Hollow Area arc! It's so good. Love how you put your own spin on SAP's story elements. |
| WwEpsilonwW chapter 35 . 5/4/2023 Argo really just took it all off, huh? Rat out of the bag and everything. |
| WwEpsilonwW chapter 34 . 5/3/2023 Philia didnt say Kitito and Kizmel will save her, she said Kirito and the others will save her. Hm... |
| WwEpsilonwW chapter 32 . 5/3/2023 Ah, Ark Sophia. The nostalgia! |
| WwEpsilonwW chapter 32 . 5/2/2023 Interesting. I knew meditation was important but to think it had to do with the unique skills as well. |
| WwEpsilonwW chapter 31 . 5/2/2023 OH SHIIIIITTTT. She pulled up with the "Father" line. |