I love this so much! 3

This is criminally good.

I love how you portrayed Sabo. Its like he was on the edges of the precipices ever since he saw Ace again, like there was screaming beneath the calm.

You got me crying real good at the end of this chapter, when all three brothers were finally, finally reunited. And it wasnt just sunshine and rainbows, but it smelled mighty promising.

I realised that in my endless pursuit of angst, i missed the traumas that couldn't be voiced out loud yet, the promises that burnt the tongue on the way out. There was something tangible but fleeting in Sabo's attitude. How you wrote him. Like you weren't quite admonishing him but urging the readers to look past the facades and really, really look at this man.

I think it was the way you wanted us to see how people treated Sabo, how Ace sometimes saw him not quite like the boy he grew up with but a man with deep-seated shadows. Sabo didn't lie when he said that Ace was the most emotional mature one.

Oh this story was so weirdly out there, and yet, I loved every moment. The humor was hilarious, and yet you showed the hurt that's shattering Sabo and the pain that Ace is also in. It's so good. Some great Sabo dialogue too. Loved his lines the best. Great job!

nice

Wow... C'était vraiment intense et j'ai adoré ça ! Je pense que c'est un de mes One-shot préférés !

Dayum. Like, bestest story ever. Right here. This one.

cool

Gah I wanna cry, poor Sabo has been through so much, glad the brothers got to reunite. Nice story!

The way you portrayed Sabo and Ace was so amazing! Their brotherly banter was on point that I can see it really happening on canon. It's hard to find a story focused on Ace and Sabo.

Thank you for this great story!

What an amazing mix of brotherly love and angst. I'd been wondering about Sabo's reactions to Ace's fire.

Love your Luffy

And the end with Shanks and Whitebeard, pretty great!

I love the emotional energy and Sabo's crazy

Oh. My. Goodness.

Koala is my favorite. I lived Garp, but hit damn she is amazing

Ugh. Just, the violent brotherly love. Amazing. My favorite

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IT GOT BETTER!

All of this! I love that Garp got added, and that they were fighting in front of him.

Just, everything. I laughed so hard, honest to goodness laughed out loud. I love this chapter. Its amazing

This is so funny and amazing and I love the dynamics between Sabo and Ace and its definitely happier than cannon and I love this so much!