|Reviews for Satis|
| Akatsuki's Kyuubi chapter 14 . 2/2/2018
Love... *Hugs Alucard plushy*
| glustora chapter 14 . 1/31/2018
loving this fanfic! it's really starting to get spicy and I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Fookasu221 chapter 12 . 1/29/2018
I don't know if this is intentional, but it's really funny and incredibly appropiate for this last scene that Alucard's theme from the anime is called "A left foot trapped in a sensual seduction".
| Fookasu221 chapter 14 . 1/8/2018
Picking daisies and making something out of them... The young (blonde) girl sees an unusual specimen of a common animal and runs after it 'without thinking' or thinking only of the thing that makes the animal unusual... Is it me, or this is another "Alice" reference? Probably just me.
Poor Seras, she has yet to learn what 'being a thid-wheel' is, haha. On a more serious note, the first time I read this fic, I couldn't help but picture her younger. I mean, Seras is supposed to be 12 years old here, right? I imagined her closer to 8. But on a second reading, it became harder to pinpoint. More like 10, maybe? I'm still having trouble imagining her as twelve, though, again, maybe it's just me.
Now, onto the ending... Is that her eyeball that fell out?! I wonder how Alucard is gonna react to that. Is it that time-space is trying to right itself again? The more she changes about what she had lived, the more broken it becomes? If XXXHolic and TRC taught us anything is that if you mess with the Time-Space continuum, you better be prepared to suffer the consecuences, after all, everything has a price... Though, in this case, Integra didn't do it on purpose. Did someone else did? Do Alucard's new Schrodinger powers have anything to do with all this?
Sorry for all the rambling. Hope to see an update soon! I can't believe you'd leave us on such a cliffhanger! Haha.
| Fookasu221 chapter 8 . 1/7/2018
Love, love, love the setup for this first kiss. Alucard's restlessness serves to up the tension (on his part only) that leads to his utter shock at her actions.
| Fookasu221 chapter 5 . 1/7/2018
The writing of the scene of Integra and Walter is delightful.
"You've no right to speak of him this way" is laced with such rightfulness, resentment and, I dare say, protectiveness of Alucard, I picture her as a child vigorously hugging something precious keeping it out of the grasp of someone perceived to have done it wrong... The idea of the mask cracking and the splinters works wonderfully. The visual of the teacup conveys really well the emotional struggle she is going through to uphold her facade.
Seras' "It wasn't because he didn't love you" hits right in the feels, and I wonder if Integra has not thought it extensive to Alucard as well? That if he hadn't returned it wasn't because he did not love her?
Ahh, 'insipid' is one of my favourite insults.
Keep up the good work!
P.S.: I hope my comments are of use to you, and not terribly dull.
| Fookasu221 chapter 4 . 1/7/2018
Really, it's charming how irritated Alucard is because Integra doesn't tell him what's actually wrong with her. It betrays how much he really cares for her underneath all the teases and mind games. I, mean, his sarcastic "nothing" makes it painfully obvious he's taken it as a personal offense, and it's not a matter of mere curiosity (even if, as a monster driven by passions, he is driven to satisfy that curiosity).
Alucard and Walter's rivalry is both amusing and heart-breaking. Especially when one remembers "Snow White" and its 'apple tart vs meringue' scene (I shall not expand on this further so as not to spoil the story for anyone). It really brings about a sense of sorrow on what was lost. (Foolish Walter, you ruined everything...!)
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/4/2018
*flails a bit*
Wow. This whole story is amazing and I look forward to reading more of it in the future. I'm adding a note to the saved link about keeping the tissue box within reach, though - I've gone through quite a few.
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/4/2018
Damnit. I'm going to spend quite a lot of this story crying, aren't I? At least until Integra gets used to the change and has re-met everyone who will make her want to cry.
Proof you've done a wonderful job, though, hun.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2018
Wow. You did an incredible job with this chapter. Even going into it knowing it was a "die and wake up in your past self" story I was crying.
| Gin-san needs his parfait chapter 14 . 1/4/2018
I would gift you with a poem as you have gifted us with your masterful words.
But I am a mere spec of dust in this, never even considered to be weighted against one such as you.
And so, I only pose one question that is not my own: Have you ever seen anyone for whom death turned out badly?
| Tsuyu no Inochi chapter 2 . 1/1/2018
Ah... Alucard and Integra back together again; I so can't wait to see what the future (alternate) holds for these two. I can't help but wonder what Integra should have done or should change and how it will affect the future (again alternate).
Happy New Year!
| JoeEngland chapter 14 . 12/13/2017
Wonderful story. It's marvelous how you've managed to extrapolate the personalities of everyone involved, and furthermore how you've fleshed out an older, wiser Integra who's managed to shed the bias which youth tends to carry towards youthful sentiment.
| FrancesMinus chapter 14 . 12/10/2017
I love this! It's easy to miss the complexity of these characters behind the coolness and action, but you
nailed it! You are a very talented writer and I cant wait to read more :)
| Tsuyu no Inochi chapter 1 . 12/4/2017
There are no words to express this opening chapter. This could have been a one-shot, it contained so much information and worth. Great portrayal of Integra\Seras relationship, not to mention, mentioning Pip (God... I so loved his character). Looking forward to the rest.