Reviews for The Rise of the Pale Dragon
prinzjay1998 chapter 5 . 7/29
Damn. Where's the rest!?

Good read. At least this one's somewhat new. Don't mind the retards below me. I don't see them complaining about canon compliant fics that seemingly plague this site.
Bluenait chapter 4 . 4/23
Fucking pussy beta bitch Potter fucking trash fic
omes848484 chapter 4 . 10/30/2022
what a fucking retard. just like the person that wrote this piece of shit.
Aavv21 chapter 5 . 9/12/2022
I don't understand how people even like this shit! 5 chapters of a whole lot of nothing! Horrible.
Andromedanaea chapter 2 . 7/4/2022
I'm loving this! I just wish Hermione and Ron had come with him!
hermonine chapter 4 . 5/30/2022
haha he ran from a hoard of unclothed woman to be with a dragon haha yep so harry! And yes Sirius would be disappointed haha.
EkaterinaSteele chapter 5 . 3/31/2022
would love to see more of this story
Asura37 chapter 5 . 12/10/2021
My favorite parte is all the misunderstandings. I hope Dany or Harry help the people from Slaver's Bay to consolidate their freedom.
libraryrockerr chapter 5 . 10/14/2021
I super enjoyed this.

HelpmeHermione chapter 5 . 9/13/2021
Good start. Wish there was more. Hard not to dislike the creepy Melissandra. Hate to think of that religious zealot getting her claws into Harry. She is just nasty! Danny however with her purple eyes and his green...what a pretty babies they would have. What girl wouldn't dig a wizard? Please finish. You're a tease!
HelpmeHermione chapter 3 . 9/13/2021
He should name the dragon Valcor. Definitely a luck dragon.
Spidersauce chapter 4 . 7/15/2021
Also yes. Sirius would most emphatically be disappointed in Harry. He'd probably disown him haha
Spidersauce chapter 4 . 7/15/2021
If you ever actually continue this, definitely Missandei x Harry. If the language barrier is ever to be crossed it'll be after she and Harry spend a ton of time togetherthey could thus easily grow close. Dany seems a bit too promiscuous for Harry's taste.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/4/2021
really great start to a story and good premise! Shame it hasn't been continued...

Please pick this back up again and finish it!
Mastersgtjames chapter 2 . 3/18/2021
ugh... hopefully MC is Very educated... Cauz crossover stories are utterly worthless when they lose whatever would make them special. Like, Imagine a story about Gandalf from LotR showing up in Mass Effect, only without magic. Or without any knowledge. it loses pretty much anything that would make it cool. Harry Potter crossovers are good because of the utility and variety of Harry Potter Magic. Character crossovers can be good, but if they do not have their magic, or just as importantly knowledge of how to use it, then it is dumb.
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