Reviews for Thwarted |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Even though I had my doubts at first, I enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, it got off to a very slow and confusing start, but it's getting better |
![]() ![]() ![]() These are 2 very broken people. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, so far, this isn't your best story. But, I'm still reading it for now. I've always enjoyed your writing so I'm giving it a chance |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did I just read this in six hours. Yes. Did I have other plans that I actually needed to get to today. Also yes. But I could not my phone down this was so damn good. I wouldn't even know where to start. I just I loved it so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic has given me pause from the beginning. I had hoped it would improve, but I was wrong. Nearly 10 chapters in and Kylo is still an obsessed, deranged stalker with no moral compass to speak of. I think his character might actually be darker here than in the movies. What Kylo Ren is expressing isn't love; it's possession and obsession. The fanfiction community needs to stop romanticizing toxic, abusive relationship dynamics. |
![]() ![]() I love your work I am wondering if you wrote anything post TROS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed it. Keep up the hard work |
![]() ![]() I love Hux now! |
![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful story! I truly loved it! Well done. |
![]() ![]() You are definitely my favorite Reylo author! Well done! |
![]() ![]() Ha! That’s right, Hux, knock some sense into that thick, dark head of his! |
![]() ![]() Aww! I love Hux now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() (I'm not english native speaker than this review may have some gramatical problems, I'm sorry) I wasn't expecting to have another huge favorite fanfiction in my library of anual reading, but now I have and I'm so glad about it. Thank you for your story and for sharing all this work with us! I can see the compromise in your writting and even in your autor notes. I wish I could do just like you hehehe Your character and plot delelopment is truly amazing. All the little pices of information along the story make so much sense at the end in a sense that EVEN I (a sad and bitter person who loves tragic things) can not compain even a little bit about this gorgeous happy ending. It all happend in the right scale and I loved it. To be really honest with you, your story made me like more the canon and the characters in it. When I had only the movies in my mind I couldn't make much sense of the storyline and how it all runs so fast without time to process the feelings envolved. Now I can aprecciate more the new movies, thanks to you! Now, a more serious thing: even if it's a rated M fanfiction, it might be of your beneffit place a warner of sensitive content at the beggining of the chapter 58 where Kylo goes to the water alone, just in case someone reading has already traumas with that topic, and maybe change the way Rey talks about it as cowardice and easy way, since it's... complicated define this action this way. Thank you again for doing this amazing work. I'll probably read this every year and love it over and over again! hehe |
![]() ![]() You have given us a new Hux and I love him! |