|Reviews for Modus Operandi|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
actualiza por favor me gustan tus historias
| krislovesgd chapter 11 . 6/13
Next chapter... Pls
| krislovesgd chapter 1 . 6/12
I like this already
| Aka.na.Sasori chapter 11 . 2/15
| Daastan Go chapter 9 . 11/18/2017
I don't think I've ever laughed at a non-consensual sex scene (this hard) in a manner where I would outright consider it to be some sort of parody. This was ... wow. Your Madara is so hyperbolic and overt in his displays of being a love-sick caricature for Sakura that it just baffles me as to why you even wrote this without putting in some modicum of self-awareness.
I haven't happened by any plausible reasons for him to be so stupidly obsessed with an air-head who has little charms bar the artificial, fat, and throbbing ones you seem to have forcefully and brutally shoved into her body-pun intended. And you had about a dozen chapters to prove his mindset to me. But here I am, still unconvinced and utterly shocked at his cliched antics of obsessions with little girls many women fantasize about concerning rich, powerful, and handsome men.
He seems to can't get enough of her, and you made that obvious through the 'anime-lewd-levels of dark' morning sex session, which wasn't any less silly than the last non-consensual one. Albeit there, her long-winded 'nos' had a little effect: 'oh so sick, but oh so hot. Madara is so dark, dark and mysterious, too,' which I'm guessing was the image you aimed for.
This doesn't appear to be a serious fiction at all: from your initial claims about' dark themes (Lord, I really do dislike this childish term now)' and whatnot to the actual usage of them was not a smooth ride; you seemed to have personified all themes into jesters just for some needless spectacles that are as nonsensical as Madara's comical and sexually charged inner thoughts.
I always am on a lookout for explorations into the dreary lands of sexual obsessions, but this was just ruefully lacking. Your issues are dime a dozen: the plot is absurd as it makes little sense, there is little coherence between the disjointed scenes, and your structural issues are numerous and odd-you really need to work on your grammar and structuring, because these could have salvaged some of this fiction's bizarro-world content where the business world tycoon is just reduced to an idiot slavering over a novice who isn't even slightly fascinating on any front.
My point being, make your premise work. Don't leave tidbits to draw in children simply for masturbation but do your themes justice. Sadly, this really wasn't for the 'faint-hearted,' but for the 'joy-filled hearts.' I enjoyed it for what it was.
| Anonymous 219 chapter 1 . 10/20/2017
The story's already got me hooked!
| Alice aquabld chapter 11 . 9/4/2017
this shit is fckd up. please finish it.
| ines960 chapter 11 . 8/31/2017
The nexttttttttttt !
| ThatPageantGirl chapter 8 . 8/29/2017
| ThatPageantGirl chapter 7 . 8/29/2017
I can only imagine what scheme Madara's cooked up...
| ThatPageantGirl chapter 6 . 8/28/2017
There's just something about a guy that finds intelligence sexy...
| ThatPageantGirl chapter 5 . 8/27/2017
And what a great statement to leave on :D
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/23/2017
I keep re-reading this because it's so good. I like that each of the stories has madaras' motives as slightly different. I'm really interested to see when/if he brings her around others to "work in the office". I love that tobirama was involved earlier too. Each story (although all dark) has a different flavour to it. It's greatly appreciated.
| august10045 chapter 3 . 8/20/2017
Sakura you poor Spit fire you..
| august10045 chapter 2 . 8/20/2017
Madara The Perv.