This is my favorite fic of all time I hope ur doing okay author kun

Not gonna lie did not relaise that mc was some how related to orichimaru before this chap really made me think he was uchiha but with the yellow eyes orchimarus reaction and ankos reaction i can say that nice work

His parents death are so anticlimactic, like it was completely avoidable. He just sorta ran at them while a random Suna Shinobi slowly decapitated them, didn't use sunshin, no jutsu, nothing and refuses to use Jiangu until they were both dead (along with his unborn sibling). Honestly that's at least 60% Alvacarus' fault for just NOT doing anything but screaming Mom over and over until she got killed. Literally the second she died he kills the Shinobi and those around him easily so he practically let his parents die, really really stupid deaths

Ah he got a more effed up version of venom shoved into him it looks like. Unfortunately fortunate?

It's odd this guy dosent ever suspect for a second he's orochimaru's kid. It's pretty damn obvious, if nothing else than with the golden snake eyes. Literally only orochimaru and karui have told eyes, ignoring every other clue as well this is a big one

This is an English novel, why the japanese words?
I can already see this going the way of the dodo, I'm out.

lmao is this a naruto x male reader if i ask?

it has been 5 years. i just re-read this fic but why the cliff hanger? did you die to covid or something?

Someone named Alvarcus, in the naruverse universe, More suitable for oc harypotter lol

first half was good, it got worse with MCs personality.

Woooooooow. ur so mean. how could you leave us like this. And it was on purpose wasnt it. im literally crying right now

You put the wrong link. Heres the right onehttpswww. deviantart ur welcome

sucks that you wrote yourself into a corner and dropped this :/

wtf is that for a name dodnt fit at all into the world...

Yikes im out the moment hes okay with murdering children for a guy who defected is the moment i say fuck this guy i hope he dies