Oh shit Alvarcas cracked

I’m totally using the “full ass or no ass” line

I love this so much. Jailer Kunoichi is literally me fr

I feel like the Konoha group is a bit too entitled.

Ah yes, I thought it was a bit..strange that Alvarcas hasn’t felt this yet. I’m sure with how well you write his character he’s not going to do a 180 but I feel like this is far more realistic than him hating orochimaru just as much as he always has constantly even With what the Sanin regards him as.

Dude…. My daddy issues can’t take this. Alvarcas is strong for not calling Orochimaru dad and playing catch with him because at this point I would.

That aside, I love how you write the snake guy, not out of character but fun.

I love how you wrote Alvarcas to be so hateful. With how Orochimaru treats him, I would be calling him father at that point. Ik he’s like horrible and totally a grade A asshole but there would be *some* little bit of attachment

You know... It's a telling sign when after reaching chapter 75, having read more than 600k words I still feel I want more.
The fic is great, I loved it, I hope one day though unlikely you do finish it.
Anyways if you're still alive and see this Mr Author know that you have created a truly good story.

Dropped this due to sub par MC. His whole motivation in this life is to be the strongest but he is about as motivated as a sloth in his shinobi school, He does the bare minimum effort required and ends up being average overall and thinks he is on his way to the top of the world...

And he let them go thats some dumv shit. Im sorry im done

ALRIGHT, this is a dead dove, but you should totally eat it, it’s amazing!

didn't do anything

useless shitty writer

started out well, the characters were logical and fun. BUT it was after Orochimaru appeared in the forest and the plot went bad. it was very noticeable. as if the author had been replaced or someone else, without experience, began to write. the story flew by at the speed of light, and the characters were as illogical as possible. This fanfiction looks like it was written by a small child . I tried to read it after all, but it's impossible

I was going to bring up the whole no blood thingno summons. Then I remembered that our Black String Friends can make blood for him, or at least was in the process of doing so during the Tsunade fight.

I wonder if Sasuke's mark formed the hand-wings as a corrupted manifestation of a Susanoo's limbs?