Amazing story I hope you finish it!

Lame name? Check. Looks like a chick? Check. Knows that he is in a dangerous world? Check. Does he train? No because he wants to be average. This entire story makes no sense at all. He knows that he has to be strong to survive but he is happy to be mediocre and still hopes to an S- rank shinobi. Don't even get me started with his stupid ass obsession with chakra strings like if it's gods gift to mankind. Overall this story is stupidly lame.

Professional Grade story telling right here. The plot is extremely well crafted and never feels forced, or questionable. The Main Character is compelling, struggling with their morality in a compelling and realistic way. Their impact on the wider world is well constructed and thought out.

Easily top 5 material. 10/10.

Dropping because the MC's name ruins all sense of immersion.

I hope that Al brings Sakura back to life then uses Rinne Rebirth to fully revive her. Also I hope he figures out that Danzo used the Sharigan on Tsunade.

sasuke the best

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Right Orochi popping up in the exams is what is weird and forced, totally nothing else that happened in the exams was weird and forced.

dead

The chakra strings Idea is so good.

read a fic called an exercise in stupidity... some woman comes up to you a civilian and tries to slap you... you grab her hand and either slap her back or throw her away.. not get hit... it makes you sound like some edgy emo kid that takes the bullies beting than goes home and cuts himself..

he is like a Sodomasochist... he keeps felling angry but he keeps forgiving everyone , understanding everyone... that's no fun... it makes the story frustrating... he is like a ninja saint...

Tired of the "pain and sorrow" bullshit and don't want to hear the "I know where shes coming from" bullshit. The latter is even worse in this scenario. He was betrayed through and through. Even after explaining things. Get mad. Be mad. Be furious. Not fucking sympathetic. Sympathetic isn't the first reaction you have when someone fucks you over. That's after giving them a piece of your fucking mind.

God that pissed me the fuck off. Using the poor-pitiful-me shit isn't going to always be moving if it doesn't fucking resonate.

Only complaint I have so far. Otherwise, good shit.

All of that... was hella intense. Holy shit. I didn't expect Sakura dying.

... Holy fuck.

I had suspicions but it still surprised the hell out of me. And this symbiote thing too.

Damn things got good.