Reviews for The Unwoven Threads of Fate
Plumpy chapter 1 . 12/11/2021
Insanely good story. Shame to not see the ending. Thank you!
Ketchup chapter 19 . 12/9/2021
I love the OMAKE. And actually, when I think of Kisame, I can totally see him as a guy who wants a pet lol.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2021
Update this please it's amazing
Icicleact3 chapter 75 . 12/6/2021
Awaiting the next chapter. The mental warfare will be seriously fun to read
Rabbids chapter 1 . 11/29/2021
ok. another fic where mc has non japanese name witth parents who clearly have japanese ones. how the fuck would they even pronounce that properly?
aperson1234567890 chapter 70 . 11/26/2021
Ok, Al has gone from Deadpool to Abridged Alucard.
aperson1234567890 chapter 68 . 11/26/2021
God dang it. I need to stop liking characters.
aperson1234567890 chapter 52 . 11/24/2021
Alright, now I want to know what the two things he had planned with a rake are.
Tony McNucklz chapter 17 . 11/24/2021
I can't even get through the chapter. The unrelatable gary stu-ness of the character just smothers what should be an interesting story. The plot is interesting, the twists, his origins, his new buddy, all of it, but the character himself is boring. He gets along with everyone, he learns without any effort, or at least thats the impression made. He's always sorry even when someone else idls the one tha pulled shit, it's boring.
Tony McNucklz chapter 13 . 11/24/2021
Yup, definitely related to Orochimaru. Still not sure how he's potentially his son but allegedly has average for chakra reserves.
aperson1234567890 chapter 47 . 11/24/2021
His sass and snark has reached Deadpool levels. I love it.
aperson1234567890 chapter 46 . 11/24/2021
Ok that omake was amazing.
aperson1234567890 chapter 40 . 11/24/2021
You are ruthless mr author. I like it.
Tony McNucklz chapter 11 . 11/24/2021
Alvarcus Mar? Now he sounds like a sith lord.
Tony McNucklz chapter 6 . 11/24/2021
His string stuff, while a neat idea and one I've thought about exploring myself outside of puppetry, is accelerating way to fast. As in absurdly fast, and not just the strings, when the fuck did he do training to multitask in a dozen directions at all those stones?
Wait, he has the chakra control to make and operate not just ten strings individually and independently, but a multitude more out of his back, and he hasn't even started the training to improve his chakra control? Did you just make shit up and slap it in with zero thought to order of operations and logical growth?
Absolutely nothing about his skill growth makes the slightest bit of sense and it's hate fucking my suspension of disbelief into whimpering pieces.
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