Reviews for The Unwoven Threads of Fate
Lovestarved chapter 61 . 12/1/2023
I’m totally using the “full ass or no ass” line
Lovestarved chapter 60 . 12/1/2023
I love this so much. Jailer Kunoichi is literally me fr
Lovestarved chapter 59 . 12/1/2023
I feel like the Konoha group is a bit too entitled.
Lovestarved chapter 50 . 11/30/2023
Ah yes, I thought it was a bit..strange that Alvarcas hasn’t felt this yet. I’m sure with how well you write his character he’s not going to do a 180 but I feel like this is far more realistic than him hating orochimaru just as much as he always has constantly even With what the Sanin regards him as.
Lovestarved chapter 47 . 11/30/2023
Dude…. My daddy issues can’t take this. Alvarcas is strong for not calling Orochimaru dad and playing catch with him because at this point I would.

That aside, I love how you write the snake guy, not out of character but fun.
Lovestarved chapter 32 . 11/28/2023
I love how you wrote Alvarcas to be so hateful. With how Orochimaru treats him, I would be calling him father at that point. Ik he’s like horrible and totally a grade A asshole but there would be *some* little bit of attachment
Nagi Aoe chapter 75 . 11/12/2023
You know... It's a telling sign when after reaching chapter 75, having read more than 600k words I still feel I want more.
The fic is great, I loved it, I hope one day though unlikely you do finish it.
Anyways if you're still alive and see this Mr Author know that you have created a truly good story.
mattzem6 chapter 3 . 11/5/2023
Dropped this due to sub par MC. His whole motivation in this life is to be the strongest but he is about as motivated as a sloth in his shinobi school, He does the bare minimum effort required and ends up being average overall and thinks he is on his way to the top of the world...
BingbongBingity chapter 17 . 11/2/2023
And he let them go thats some dumv shit. Im sorry im done
Onlymaybeandthatsabigmaybe chapter 1 . 10/1/2023
ALRIGHT, this is a dead dove, but you should totally eat it, it’s amazing!
Comic Manga chapter 3 . 9/26/2023
didn't do anything
Comic Manga chapter 3 . 9/26/2023
useless shitty writer
zhan'cheg chapter 15 . 9/17/2023
started out well, the characters were logical and fun. BUT it was after Orochimaru appeared in the forest and the plot went bad. it was very noticeable. as if the author had been replaced or someone else, without experience, began to write. the story flew by at the speed of light, and the characters were as illogical as possible. This fanfiction looks like it was written by a small child . I tried to read it after all, but it's impossible
doubledamn chapter 27 . 9/17/2023
I was going to bring up the whole no blood thingno summons. Then I remembered that our Black String Friends can make blood for him, or at least was in the process of doing so during the Tsunade fight.

I wonder if Sasuke's mark formed the hand-wings as a corrupted manifestation of a Susanoo's limbs?
doubledamn chapter 16 . 9/16/2023
Just missing Wind and he'll be able to pull off an elemental version of Doffy's Pentachromatic Strings.
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