Reviews for The Unwoven Threads of Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You put the wrong link. Heres the right onehttpswww. deviantart ur welcome |
![]() ![]() ![]() sucks that you wrote yourself into a corner and dropped this :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() wtf is that for a name dodnt fit at all into the world... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes im out the moment hes okay with murdering children for a guy who defected is the moment i say fuck this guy i hope he dies |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Meant for chapter 75, but reached review limit) I remember when this chapter first released. God, it had me at the edge of my seat... now I've been sitting there for years. I hope you're okay, author-kun. |
![]() ![]() I apologize; I take back everything I ever said about you! |
![]() ![]() Ah cmon no, not Tayuya for the pairing! Please, god, nooo! And fic was going so well too, damn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() broooooo nooooooooooooo. why Ino of all people |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOT THE SEX ED WITH OROCHIMARU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOT GINA! *crying* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously this story is just way too judgmental it is getting tiresome in a more realistic world which this is trying to paint the konoha is not heroes they run assasination businesshell even here kakashi admits to mass murdering shinobi… and honestky it is not like the grass is true allies of konoha … they tried to kidnap hyuga heiress … and turn her into baby factory. But yes because they are konoha allies anyone who attacks them is immediately evil … i am out of here This is a decent fiction if - at the start you forget that the mc is supposed to have detailed information about future (and instead think that he died young like early teens and had bare minimum knowledge about narutoakatsuki exist, orochimara invasionorochimara big bad and impending future zombie army… Then after chapter 50 cca it starts to really come downhill tsunade becomes absolutely unlikeae and mc doesn’t even try to justify himself even when there are many valid reasons he could say …hey orichamaru dead bad since you cant wnsure he is dead, cant kill kabuto who is big issue, no longwr do you have another opponent to akutsuki and lets face it they are far bigger threat So mc is setting himself as martyr and doing his pity party instead of explaining himself and it is getting tiresome and forced … |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah this is getting way too judgmental… after all it is not like konoga are the ultimate good guys at least at this point in time they have quite a few skeletons in tgeur closet… in one word danzo, uchias, naruto treatment … |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow orochimaru really treats Al well … sometimes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this was cute sasuke acting like an elder brother |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nah what would nake them happier is if you dont continue on path of killing but reagardless they are dead so live on the way you like |