Reviews for The Unwoven Threads of Fate
Easter Man chapter 32 . 7/4/2016
Yey... Alvarcus has snaped...!
Well, he can do it!

He may snap some suna genin in the chunin exam... Hehe...

Good luck!
Abydmal chapter 32 . 7/4/2016
Omake: Underworld's Father's Day

At the "Best Dad of the Year" competition.

"I gave my son the Jiongu in the most excruciating way possible to test his strength of character and pain tolerance." Orochimaru proclaimed smugly.

Minato raised an unimpressed eyebrow and replied in a calm undertone. "Well, I sealed the Kyuubi in my son, leaving him ostracized and hated by everyone, except for those worthy of his friendship, to test his perseverance and make sure he had true friends for a lifetime."

Orochimaru made a gagging sound at the mention of friends and and smiled cruelly. "Well my servant got rid of pesky connections such as family and friends that would only hold back my son from reaching his full potential, albeit it was out of order... NGHhh!"

The Fourth Hokage had flash stepped behind him and rammed a Rasengan into the Snake Sannin's back. "I and Kushina left part of our chakra inside of the seal to make sure that our son had moral support during his times of need... guggh"

The Kusanagi sword shot out of Orochimaru's ass and pierced through the Yellow Flash's throat. "Oh please, a one time consolation after the Jinchuriiki's little tantrum is hardly measurable against a life time companion such as my superior Jiongu!"

Golden sand whipped around both rivals, the threads tightening around them and forcing them into a kiss. "Stop your senseless bickering. It is obvious to everyone that I win the contest. Gaara through grueling survival training has reached his full potential and assumed the position of Kazekage and supreme commander." Rasa proclaimed smugly.

I Have no idea where I was going with that. Anywho. Alvarcus will need to simulate blood for his wounds during the exams or the gig is up. Good on him that he has a Firin' Mah Lazors! attack.
TEAM 7 ADVENTURES chapter 3 . 7/4/2016
I I'm only on chapter 3 but this guy obviously hasn't watch Naruto if they were allowed to use kunai and shuriken or whatever this guy would definitely be killed talking about I would win haha in the demon Fox doesn't give Naruto energy
DarkDust27 chapter 32 . 7/3/2016
Damn things got super dark! O.o"
DarkDust27 chapter 31 . 7/3/2016
Ha! Shizune is gonna smack Alvarcus for sure!
Seikah chapter 16 . 7/3/2016
16 chapters in now and I'm really enjoying this. Imaginative, and very cool escalation.
anaisonfire chapter 32 . 7/3/2016
That was heavy. Like the spider said, it(he) was skipping between different emotions fast.
...This won't end well.
Yashamaru Kotohime chapter 32 . 7/3/2016
This fic is awesome can't wait for the next post
Miyukino chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
Alvarcus. Really? A weird name in a Japanese setting? His parents apparently have normal Japanese names...
anaisonfire chapter 31 . 7/2/2016
Ahaha, looks like Tsunade's got a new drinking buddy xD Also, Shizune's reaction~ Oh man, I love this fic :D
It's going to be very interesting Chunin Exams though. Can't wait to see it
Jayordan chapter 31 . 7/1/2016
Really great chapter! Cant wait for more.
deconneur chapter 30 . 7/1/2016
I like to think a small tear escaped Kakashi's eye as he grabbed the letter.
Easter Man chapter 30 . 7/1/2016
Ooooh my goosh, Gina is dead!... Orochimaru you bastard!
Kkkkk...

And, hey... Tsunade took things best than I imagine...

Keep going... Good Luck!
BloodyLoved chapter 30 . 7/1/2016
Ah, great chapters love them so much. Can't wait for the next ones, because I enjoyed these ones immensly. And I can't wait to read about Kakashi's reaction to what Tsunade and the letter. :-D
DarkDust27 chapter 30 . 7/1/2016
Ooo Kakashi is gonna be pissed! But only because he's worried.
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