Reviews for The Unwoven Threads of Fate
Zafrinel chapter 11 . 6/8/2016
love it! the relationship between him and sasuke is adorable
keep doing the awesome work!
DarkDust27 chapter 10 . 6/7/2016
LOL OMG "be very wary, my virtue is at stake"? Ha! Thanks for the update.
Lord Inquisitor B Joseph H chapter 10 . 6/7/2016
That Ending Sentence was wonderful. I love this story so far keep up the good work ..
Mari chapter 9 . 6/1/2016
Will he turn out to be part Uchiha?
DarkDust27 chapter 9 . 6/2/2016
LoL I hope his girly looks get him into situations where he gets hit on! ;3
AkumaNoKoori chapter 4 . 5/29/2016
the plot just died
Rachnis chapter 8 . 5/29/2016
Very good! I like the realism employed in this story.
Abydmal chapter 8 . 5/29/2016
Well I can say that I'm glad you chose proper use of chakra strings. Puppets (especially those in the Naruto series) seemed quite bulky, ineffective and unwieldy. Direct control of the weapons is almost as dangerous as Gaara's sand (more if they are tiny enough to administer poison undetected). Only downside is no stable defence and reliance on speed and accuracy (there isn't power without mass to back up the strikes).

I wonder how Naruto's isolation will affect him. Precious people and all that missing. Maybe he'll stop fooling around so that people take him seriously.
Shadows Of Knowledge chapter 8 . 5/28/2016
Please hurry
Gaaraloverforever11 chapter 7 . 5/23/2016
I look forward to the next update. )
Mari chapter 7 . 5/19/2016
Keep writing!
BloodPokemon101 chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
Very nice on portraying the sensation of being reborn. And a SI not familiar with the Naruto world? That's something to see.
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