This had such potential you just ruined it with his garbage personality and garbage skills

Dude you fucking ruined this with his weird ass personality

I can feel author’s brain cells fizzing out. The scenes are hilarious

Orochimaru is such an asshole but fuck I love him so much

I’m legit crying. My dad didn’t come to my graduation (where I was second to the valedictorian Best loser I might be but fuck I was holding back tears) because his boss’s daughter’s wedding was that day. And Orochimaru shows up to Alvarcus’s chunun exam? One he was over qualified for and was proud of himmmmm.

Ugh Orochimaru is such a good father.

Every single time I reread this, I always melt at the part orochimaru looks happy. I know he’s horrible and everything but ughhhhh

TRASH

What an incredible story, it's a shame you haven't written in so long. I loved every chapter, every minute of reading it. Thanks for the awesome story, eventhough I would have loved if it was at least double the word count. Cheers mate.

It gets a bit old after the sorry moves forward, it's ok but my interest dwindled as you follow the original story but kinda made it boring.
Imma give this a miss

Cool story bro.

God damnit Doctor! Spank his ass FFS

The fic was really good up until chapter 58 or 59 I'm sorry but if you've been through that much pain that much heartache that much bullcrap I'll find it absolutely that he's all of a sudden turned back to the good path because of a few words that's not how character development happens and it pisses me off for how much the mc has been through and he has explained how much he's been through and what he has done two other people it says they have sympathy for him in the chapter of the words but in action none of the characters have any respect for him whenever he says something like let's just say he just doesn't want to talk and wants to be alone there's nothing wrong with that but literally no one respects him when he says no for me as the reader it is literally the biggest pet peeve I have when it comes with these fanfics or really any novel or book is when the MC is basically disrespected for literally no reason other than the other person disrespecting him is a female it pisses me off so God damn much

Will you post this on ao3? I mostly read there these days and would love to see it there too I really love the story line and the characters

The most un-ninja mc I've ever had the displeasure of reading about. He's an absolute moron. Zero cunning or critical thinking. And everyone is absolutely retarded. Almost all characters act extremely OOC

Really, you left it at such a big cliffhanger