Reviews for Unbroken
dfcole chapter 14 . 41m
Wonderful story! I really hope Harry’s magic will come back and prevent him from becoming a vampire if he is bit or something! Keep up the great work!
Guest chapter 14 . 8/1
Love your story.
I had an idea (dont know if you'll like it?)
The only way to save Harry is for jasper to turn him (as his magic is attacking him) and the transition unlocks his magic. Whilst in transition his magic starts to show (things floating, lights ECT.. ). After transition he becomes a vampire and a wizard. He will have to explain to everyone as they have seen his power...

Can't wait to see what you write x
tatipi2262 chapter 14 . 8/3
Plz plz Update soon
Serpent91 chapter 14 . 8/1
Well written!
XOXOXsakuraXOXOX chapter 14 . 7/29
Please you need to update I your stories are my life I love your writing soooooooo much
Guest chapter 14 . 7/25
Please update
JlovesGaara chapter 14 . 7/23
Ahh! Cant wait to see what happens when Sirius and Remus get there! AMAZING story
Kitten6168 chapter 14 . 7/22
I only recently found your story and wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying it. I like how you have portrayed Harry and how he interacts with the werewolves and the Cullens. I look forward to reading what happens next. I hope Sirius gets there in time.
Shorty1410 chapter 14 . 7/9
Hey please keep going! I have read your others and just gotten to the end of this.
Some ideas :
- Sirius will be able to find out what is going on with harry
- Snape will be able to start healing harry
- the fever will unblock Harry’s magic
- harry doesn’t turn as his magic see that jasper is his mate and will make him immortal

Just some ideas I hope this helps xxxx
Kuramakiss2001 chapter 1 . 7/4
( sorry for my english )
I love the story si much pls update soon
Guest chapter 14 . 7/3
wow, amazing! Thank you for sharing!
errydaymPurple chapter 14 . 7/2
AAAAAAA, YOU CAN’T HEAR ME BUT I AM SCREAMING VERY LOUDLY AND I WOKE UP MY DOG BECAUSE OF IT. I- this- this story is magnificent, just let me tell you that. How dare you leave us on a cliffhanger, so cruelly? I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter, cannot wait.
RuetheWierdo chapter 14 . 7/1
The suspense is killing me.
RuetheWierdo chapter 1 . 6/30
I have always harbored a great hatred for Albus Dumbledore. But this thing. that I am feeling can not be described in civil wording. That man must pay.
aeka881 chapter 14 . 6/29
Wow this story !
The dramaaa!
I just find your story and its magic , clear and easy for newby in english . And this is greatly appreciated by a French like me . All character was fine and we wish the next chapter as fast as possible for find the next trouble Harry's go in .
In resume i love your work and i wish you a great muse and thanks to your husband to motivate you to publish.
You work marvellous great so thanks to your hard work.
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