Reviews for The Loudest Silence |
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FelineNinjaGrace chapter 20 . 9/7/2022 Hooray! Go girl! I think I know one of the big reasons why the Valar took her voice. Before she came to Middle Earth she didnt stand up for herself. People would pick on her and she wouldn’t say anything. This journey will teach her to not take her voice for granted and to speak up for herself in the future! |
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 17 . 9/7/2022 Wow! This chapter was so good! I felt so much emotion; helplessness, worried, anger, admiration (for Thorin. Always Thorin haha XD) and she’s so….human. She’s not some Mary Sue. She has freaking pudge for crying out loud! That’s so relatable! I’m sure she’ll be super lean and buff by the time they get to Erebor from constantly running, and learning self-defense though, which makes me love this story even more! The reason why we all love the Lord of the Rings franchise is because all of us feel small and useless as hobbits sometimes. But just like them, we can change the world too. And I love that you picked a random character to do this. Not someone who has a talent at archery, or someone self-assured and brave, you picked the lowest of the low and are slowly turning her into the diamond that all of us losers can become with time and dedication. This is such a good message to write about! I noticed that there’s not much chapters after this and it hasn’t been updated since 2020. I hope you finish this! It’s inspirational and lovely. Thank you for writing! |
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 16 . 9/7/2022 Woah. Major plot twist! The map is destroyed, does that mean they will skip visiting the elves? |
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 13 . 9/7/2022 So, I’ve always wondered why there’s not a single fan fiction story where the OC corrects Thorin’s belief that Azog is dead. If your task is to change the future, and the future is that Thorin and Kili and Fili get killed by this guy….you’d think it would be important for her to shake her head that he wasn’t dead. |
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 12 . 9/7/2022 C’mon! Is it really that hard to signal “book” to them when they ask you how you know? They aren’t going to automatically jump to the idea that their whole world is inside a book, lol, they’ll just think that you have books about other worlds. It would make it easier. Good thing they’re teaching her sign language though! |
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 11 . 9/7/2022 Awww, I liked this chapter. Maybe the reason she can’t talk is because she might argue and fight with Thorin? And the Valar want her to show kindness and love towards him through service? Maybe that’s Thorium’s secret love language: acts of service? Lol! And so in order to make sure she does the most acts of service, she’s not allowed to speak. I like it! |
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 10 . 9/7/2022 “At that, I did throw my head back with a mute laugh,” Huh. That’s a bit odd? I mean, you can still hear her breathing, can’t you? Wouldn’t it sound like funny wheezy laughing? The fact that you can’t hear ANYTHING is peculiar. But, this is fanfiction, so oh well? |
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 6 . 9/7/2022 When he asked about her incentive to come, she could have tapped on her throat to indicate that she would get her voice back. Oh well, opportunity lost XD I really hope she develops a better, more efficient way of communicating, otherwise this story isn’t going to be as exciting if all she does is shrugs and blinks haha! |
FelineNinjaGrace chapter 3 . 9/6/2022 I love this story so far! I can see, smell, and FEEL the story! And I love how you began this story with a different approach than other stories where she hangs out with Bofur in the beginning. It’s a little strange about the voice thing though. Why did the Valar take her voice of all things? How is she going to win Thorin’s heart without a voice? ;) lol! Im excited to find out! |
Guest chapter 27 . 7/25/2022 Oh my...this has been an amazing story. I've read many girl from other world joins the quest and this has got to be one of my favorites. I would love to see what happens next! Hope you and yours are staying safe. Thank you for your art! |
Guest chapter 27 . 7/6/2022 Please continue the story. I am enjoying it |
Belgarin chapter 10 . 5/2/2022 def dont flash people to get them to stay away XD XD that made me spit my drink out on the damned cat! she was not happy |
JokersBatman chapter 27 . 4/12/2022 I honestly love this and the growths and set backs present between Jenna and Thorin and oh boy I can only imagine the response of Thorin to the Gobin caves and Azog...Jenna's going to have some fun with that one... Regardless of your continuance, it has been a pleasure reading this and am delighted that you posted this! |
L chapter 27 . 3/1/2022 Hi, its been a while. Just finished rereading this (again) and I'm still so impressed with how good this is. I selfishly hope you find the motivation to continue soon. I cannot wait to see where this story goes. |
Guest chapter 27 . 1/30/2022 Beautiful fic, one of my favorites |