|Reviews for Temptation Island|
| hornofdesolation chapter 9 . 3/16/2010
I am sorry to announce that in 2006 the fanfiction author named Youkai Youko passed away. I was surprised at the time since it had never occured to me a fanfiction author might die and leave his works incomplete. This was my first realization that fanfiction authors are not immortal even if their works are. A week or two ago I discovered another fanfiction author I knew of named JuJube the Tree had also passed away. This motivated me to create a forum for remembering deceased fanfiction authors.
| Yuuki-Neko chapter 7 . 8/31/2008
I found this yesterday and already I'm interested! I hope for more chaps soon!
| Darkwitch17 chapter 9 . 6/27/2005
I loved it!
That was wonderful... the end really made me cry.
Thank you for writing this...
| Zaleone chapter 9 . 5/17/2005
sup? i liked the fic. it was cute and funny at the same time. nice.
| anaraz chapter 9 . 10/18/2004
| nanasabaku13 chapter 9 . 6/22/2004
Next story make a lemon!
I'm a weird bad girl!
Anubis in the story PLEASE!
He is cool!
| Ninetalesuk chapter 9 . 2/24/2003
Tristan is dead and Seto and Joey are a couple. This was good but, VERY WEIRD.
By the way, chapter6 is up.
| Sunsetter chapter 2 . 2/13/2003
I love it! Love your type of music. have all of those cd's except soulfly and coal chamber. Linkin park's my fave! Keep up the good work.
| Cy-Cy chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
Honda's an angel *sniff* wahhhh, thats so sappy! pegasus got zombiefied!_
| Blue Lagoon Loon chapter 9 . 1/30/2003
Oh well, at least they're rescued!
| queen domo chapter 1 . 1/30/2003
hao, hajimemashite! i had just finished reading your fic, Temptation Island. i think the story was great, and so was the plot. i noticed a few things though.. it seemed as if you were trying hard to just finish the story in the end, because it wasnt written as well as the other chapters. i also think that the mechanics isnt too well, the story wasnt really making sense. If jou fell asleep right after he confessed his love to Seto, then wouldn't he be tired before that? You didnt mention it, so i took to understanding the fact that he more likely passed out. The hammerhead shark that attacked Jou, thats puzzling me. Hammerheads usually dont *just* attack someone! and how did Yugi get the Millenium Rod? I dont think pegasus would of gone under their control, even without the Millenium eye. You cant get out of little things like that so easily silly. .- anyway, how old are you? the story was good overall, i juss wanted to mention that so u dont think all my criticizing is meant to put u down!
Ken: yea right, all u do is put people down.
Neko: Do i have to lock u up again!
Ken: maybe.. *kissy sounds, wink wink*
Neko: .;;... thats my yami.. unfortunatly..
Ken: oh c'mon u kno u luv me...
Neko: *pushes him down the basement stairs*
Ken: aaaghhhhhh! *bong*
Neko: It has been nice to meet you, keep on writing, and i hope you visit me sometime! .
| Kakarots-Frying-Pan chapter 9 . 1/30/2003
Awe, what a cute story _ There were a few grammer problems and it seemed a little rushed, but other than that this story was great _~ Are ya'll gonna do another one?
| Blue Lagoon Loon chapter 8 . 1/30/2003
Awww... I wanted shark fin soup... OH well. *sees animal Rights activists and sharks of the world sigh in relief* NEEEEEEEEEED MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRREEEEEEEE!
| Kakarots-Frying-Pan chapter 7 . 1/29/2003
Eep! SHARK! What happens now? You have to update soon! What happens to Jou now?
| McTeigue chapter 7 . 1/29/2003
No fair Cliff hanger :-P I do like this chapture thoe and I await the next.