Well, this was... absolutely freaking amazing. Good job!

I remember reading and liking this story years ago, now all I see is tired clichés and bashing. It's funny how tastes change as you get older.

And the weirdness continues. But I must admit, making Vernon and Umbitch related by blood is hilarious.

That was... completely out of the blue. Muggle sect that worship Magic came and did an "aura and future" reading to them? Just like that? That's so completely random.

I like how very sensible it is, but unfortunately, and obviously for anyone who dealt with running any organisation, people are not that sane and docile to just roll with good things. If it was a realistic story and not just "an exercise in rationality", there would be some antisocial nay-sayers, radical terrorists, false "supporters"-backstabbers and so on. Ah, the society.

Offscreen: Fudge got a working brain implant.

Have reread this with pleasure. Thanks again.

This was a fun read. I thought the approach was unique. Thank you

Oh, well done! Very well done indeed. This was a delight to read and brought many a smile to my face.

What an awesome story. I have read a few now, and apologize for saying it was based on the Traveler from Star Trek. That is the only reference I had of a character popping in and out when needed to assist with things.
And, people will always, ALWAYS, find something to disagree with within authors’ words.
Ignore them. Or thank them for their words….then just keep on doing what you’re doing. :)

lol, definitely one of my favourite chapters! And I LOVE the Omake

Amazing story

If the train left at 9 and arrived at 1, that indicates a 4-hour train ride. Yet for students it leaves at 11 and arrives after dark. 3 PM is not late enough for it to be dark in late summer, not even in northern Scotland.

"drought" is nearly the opposite of "draught", which is the word you want here.

Rr