Pls sir/madam, may I have some more? I've blasted through 45 chapters in 3 days and I NEED THE REST PLEASE

he should cut off Granger! the worthless ungrateful bitch!

hate this! hee should have just killed the stupid bitch that wrote in an obviously cursed book!

It feels contrived. Like what was the point building him as a somewhat sensible and bit more logical person if you're just gonna throw all that away? Telling Hedwig to leave? Nevermind the immortality the ability to teleport could be useful as an escape. And even before that why can't he teleport to the dungeon to inform Snape? Then there's the blowing every obstacle up part. If he wanted his powers to be secret it's a bit hard to do when you leave giant holes. And lastly why would he think he could take on Quirrell? Nevermind that he thought Voldemort was elsewhere, he used observe and got nothing. Only other ones to get that were the centaurs and Dumbledore. It just feels like there's so much against this. I'm not saying Harry was wrong for going to stop Quirrell, but that way he's doing it is. At least for what you've been writing.

Posted and scamed on webnovel by William77

trash

Maybe someone can beat you

This is brain dead. Good riddance to your trash.

it was verry cohesive very nice

Blatant copy of a PJO fic and most of this is so copied it doesnt even make sense, why would harrys english be abd and his fathers name be censroed

Absolutely incredible, I've spent the last few days hooked on this.
I'd love to see this continue in the future, although I can see it's been a fair few years since you added to it.
Any plans to pick it back up?

Tonks and Lupin.

Matpat reference

I like how your version of Dumbledore spent time in front of the mirror and went over his family members with stories. A much nicer thing to do.

This has been an amazing adventure, and I hope to see it continue in the future!