Reviews for Harry Potter and the Interlude
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7
I have never understood why people hate on the “most ancient and noble houses” theme since it makes fairly good sense to me and it’s actually quite similar to the real life British government as well. Anyway, I just wanted to say that this story was an excellent piece of work and you did a great job with it. The writing, grammar, and overall theme were well done and well thought out, and you did a great job of building Harry up into a really powerful wizard who is better than most without making it seem like an over the top unrealistic super Harry fic. In my opinion though, the best thing about this story was the world building, which was unbelievably well thought out, detailed, and doesn’t seem to have many plot holes. The workings of the government makes sense, The different culture makes sense, the opinions of the pureblood traditionalists makes sense, and this is one of less than half a dozen stories I have read (and I’ve read thousands of fics) where Draco is an actually likable character. This entire series is a masterpiece, and something you should be proud of. I would place this series in my top 10 fanfics of all time, and I hope you chose to continue your talent in writing.
Darknessdawns chapter 10 . 7/11
It amused me how only two chapters of this story was Harry's 3rd year. Of course its probably the only truly quiet year he has at Hogwarts. At any rate, this was an interesting piece and I enjoyed how detailed his summer was. I also can't wait to read the next installment since I know everything is coming to a head.
genie mann chapter 10 . 6/28
I like the story alot! Good job!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18
This is definitely the least rushed rushed 2 chapters I have ever read before…
Great skill.
ak chapter 10 . 3/14
bonne fic!
Melissa Moyer chapter 1 . 8/15/2023
The second story in this series is missing. Only parts 1,3&4 are on here
Bhare chapter 3 . 3/22/2023
Seriously Harry get over the twelve year old thinking that you HAVE to be on the under seventeen Quidditch League when you very real know that the grown ups in your lives are correct that you are still a little to young to be there. They did approve on hiring you your very own private coach. Sides you lent your brooms to the twins for them to try out. Be happy for your friends ... learn from your coach ... play Quidditch the next school year ... learn from your coach for one more summer ... play Quidditch the following school year ... turn fifteen ... then try out for the under seventeen Quidditch League ... and be the damn best player there and make large sums of money at the tender age of fifteen.
Bhare chapter 2 . 3/22/2023
At least Sirius and Remus are being true and loyal to James and Lily Potter. By willing to protect Harry against Dumbledore ... now that they know that Dumbledore actively kept Harry from Sirius's guardianship.

Nice to know that the Order won't be using 12 Grimmauld Place; because really both Sirius and Harry need there own home away from the prying eyes of the Order.

Interesting that the Order will be meeting at the Burrows through. But it is a way for Sirius to finally question on why Bill didn't inherit the title of Head of the Anicent house of Prewett family house.
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 3 . 2/27/2023
Honestly Harry’s jealousy he feels whenever some achieves something is annoying. Seriously he can’t just be happy for people.
JuliusCorvinus chapter 10 . 2/5/2023
thanks for writing Harry Potter and the Interlude
Guest chapter 10 . 12/23/2022
Such a wonderful story!
SunPho3n1x chapter 10 . 11/16/2022
Such an amazing story! I absolutely loved this! Thank you for writing this!
suraj chapter 7 . 10/26/2022
since harry has introduced draco to the muggle world drfo would change many conice dumbeledore and voldermort or what if dumbledore and griundlewald are the final villains
suraj chapter 5 . 10/26/2022
remember harry is smart cunning lord black lord gryffindor lord ravenclawyw lord peverell malfoy wouldnt wasnt to make an enemy out of potter and harry did do good becasue mucis malfoy hada a peaceful happy life until voldermort returned right? so no reaon to hate harry he wasnted to kill one of the weasleys
suraj chapter 2 . 10/26/2022
exfept i dint think lucius did have run ins with the maruders because lucius malfoys gradutated beofee them maybe he was afraid maybe he wasnted an ally
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