I liked it, condensed as you say you made it, it is well written and I loved that the Tok'ra are given a more important relationship with earth. Thank you for sharing

Even if Jolinar is not a Goa'uld, her natural arrogance and assumptions that everyone else should bow before her make her no different, I doubt she truly fights against the system lords for righteousness.

It was a really good story, narrative kept going, interesting things happening in every chapter, sorry you lost interest but it did not show. Thank you for the story.

I'm a bit sad that it's over already :(
But I do have to say, and with huge emphasis, thank you for taking the time to put an ending on it :)

I love this story

I'm sorry to hear you have lost interest in SG-1, even shortened this was a good story.

I got chills reading this. It was a good way to wrap the story up :)

I'm happy to see this completed.

It’s been a pleasure to read this. Although the last chapter might have been condensed, it felt as a good place to end things. Rounding everything up nicely.

This story is awesome! I can’t wait to read the ripples this causes!

Please please update soon

I love it
Thanks

Please update. Good story so far.

Great story update soon

Great story so far! Love sam and Martouf/Lantash pairings!