Reviews for Hope
KLR chapter 3 . 5/24/2016
Wow, a close call! I really like the premise for this story. Lantash and Martouf have hope, though, and I hope that will not be in vain.
Hocapontas chapter 3 . 5/24/2016
I'm surprised Sam didn't tell Lantash that Cronus was the one who sent the Ashrak. Will that be in a later chapter? Also you put that Apophis attacked 4 months previous while later saying that Jolinar had been dead for 4 months. Is this a mistake? Or am I missing something?
whrr.trudy chapter 3 . 5/24/2016
oh I love it, and yay she's not dead :)
celf chapter 3 . 5/24/2016
love the chapter.
can not wait for the next one.
keep up the good work.
davycrockett100 chapter 3 . 5/24/2016
Roeskva chapter 2 . 5/21/2016
Interesting beginning! I like the differences in this version, and I very much look forward to the continuation!
whrr.trudy chapter 2 . 5/20/2016
oh what a cliff hanger to leave us at! Enjoyed the chapter
davycrockett100 chapter 2 . 5/19/2016
celf chapter 2 . 5/19/2016
good chapter.
looking forward to reading more.
davycrockett100 chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
celf chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
sounds cool.
there needs to be more story's that look at this event and how it can play out in unknown ways
JAIMOL chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
A very interesting start. I'm wanting to know how you will continue this story.
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