Reviews for Hope |
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![]() ![]() Wow, a close call! I really like the premise for this story. Lantash and Martouf have hope, though, and I hope that will not be in vain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm surprised Sam didn't tell Lantash that Cronus was the one who sent the Ashrak. Will that be in a later chapter? Also you put that Apophis attacked 4 months previous while later saying that Jolinar had been dead for 4 months. Is this a mistake? Or am I missing something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh I love it, and yay she's not dead :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the chapter. can not wait for the next one. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting beginning! I like the differences in this version, and I very much look forward to the continuation! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh what a cliff hanger to leave us at! Enjoyed the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter. looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds cool. there needs to be more story's that look at this event and how it can play out in unknown ways |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting start. I'm wanting to know how you will continue this story. |