|Reviews for The Unraveling of Secrets|
| dinopoodle chapter 15 . 9/17
Great story! Really believable. Keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/5
I hope Severus gives Albus a lecture about endangering his child as Albus set up much of Harry’s adventures.
| leggylover03 chapter 15 . 9/1
Awwww how sweet!
| Hope06 chapter 15 . 8/31
And aww Harry
And thank you for your service to your country
| ravendor92 chapter 15 . 8/31
| Calmzone1 chapter 15 . 8/31
Interesting. I don’t think it was fair that Minerva was so stern with him and got a harry in trouble, especially if Albus was watching over Harry. But that’s Minerva for you. Strict Teacher and Deputy Headmistress, But not housemother for the kids.
I got a notification for ch 16/14, but it was an invalid link, so I had to search for your profile to get to read this one, 15/14
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/27
First, I know this is fanfiction and it is your story and you can change the situation all you want. That's the point of this site. However, you have put yourself in an untenable position. "Born of parents who have thrice defied him..." Now you have to go back ten years and make those changes. JKR clearly marked Lilly as an honorable person. James also, finally, for that matter. Now you cast her in a negative light. She became pregnant out of wedlock and couldn't face the consequences and deal with them honestly. Instead she traps the wealthy man who has harbored a crush on her for 10 years almost immediately after sex with Severus to make it believable? She places James as the father? You really made her appear as the worst sort of gold digger. I urge you to take off your rose colored glasses ant think this out. You write well. Just don't paint yourself into such a contradictory corner.
| geekymom chapter 15 . 8/29
| MeraHunt chapter 15 . 8/28
So cute! I am in love with this fic and can't get enough! Can't wait for the next update.
| mandancie chapter 15 . 8/28
Thank you so much! I absolutely loved this chapter. I like that Harry finally met Narcissa. I'm looking forward to what you have planned for the next chapter. Update soon, but take your time.
| misswitlock16 chapter 15 . 8/27
I love it can't wait to read more
| lilly-flower15 chapter 15 . 8/27
Great chapter update soon after
| charlotte1217 chapter 15 . 8/14
I can’t wait. Please do come back soon it’s been so long! Thanks for sharing 3 xxx
| lilyflower50 chapter 15 . 8/12
great story so far
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/7
Everyone knows that Harry is an adult and that he has been for years.