|Reviews for Text and Subtext|
| ksatan624 chapter 17 . 7/26
SCARES : "from just below her breast to her waist" sorry, but you made a mistake ( as others authors) because, if to look you the scene : Josh makes an incision with his bistoury, just under the bra strap. There has never been a section, under breasts, or on the side as all the authors say it. Then of course, then comes the description of the sufferings; she cannot raise arms. Etc. A friend operated in open heart - the breastbone was sawed in the middle then maintained by hooks(staples). 1 month later he cycled and could raise arms with no problem at all.
Sorry, but I had to say it, because it has to give erroneous fictions, with all the conceivable sufferings which supports Kate; what is false. In TV, (409 sniper) K cannot raise arms to rise to the scale ... but in fact, it is just a pretext to understand that the sniper is handicaped. It is just an invention.
| Guest chapter 27 . 7/25
Another Amazing story! Couldn't put it down.
| pherman015 chapter 1 . 7/15
Outstanding, I'm all for the sequel
| jpwood chapter 27 . 7/6
reading this one again and I must say I love the sweet and funny moments you gave them, I laughed a lot, but you still managed to make it serious, excellent story and an excellent fix to the show story line
| CKL chapter 27 . 4/2
Love your story! How about a sequal?
| Trude chapter 27 . 3/20
I guess the two are really adults since they managed to control their urges for a few hours LOL
thanks for the story - it was a wonderful read
| Trude chapter 26 . 3/20
oh thanks, I got to read at least one of the two lists - very nice!
ha, what a way to start a celebration, I guess
| Trude chapter 25 . 3/20
I'd like to hear more about the lust list and the "everything I love about you" list LOL
| Trude chapter 24 . 3/20
awww, what a beautiful kiss
| Trude chapter 23 . 3/19
I really hope Beckett will be "fit for duty" soon, or they'll both might combust with sexual frustration first or suffer some frostbite from cold showers
| Trude chapter 22 . 3/19
Castle driving around in a wet shirt, that can't be very healthy
I am surprised he didn't take it off, so that he wouldn't be sick and can't keep looking after Beckett
| Trude chapter 20 . 3/19
TSC ... nice image LOL
and somehow, you managed to make that makingeating the lava cake dirty/naughty ... I ain't complaining, just saying ...
| Trude chapter 19 . 3/19
I get that "doctor" makes Castle think of DMB but the jump to Beckett being pregnant and then congratulating her LOL
| Trude chapter 18 . 3/19
Donuts ... it is my lunch break right now (oh no, it was my lunch break one minute ago) and where are the donuts?
| Trude chapter 17 . 3/19
another argument and it was - yet again! - dealt with, without anyone being mad for long, maybe these two will actually grow up