Reviews for Percy Jackson The Dark Gamer
silentcaster chapter 35 . 10/16/2023
this is one of my favorite stories. I have been reading books, fanfiction, and webnovels for 5 years now and this is still my favorite. I felt yiu needed to know you and an amazing writer and your stories have helped me a lot when I was in a bad place. thank you
NuzhatT chapter 35 . 9/18/2023
after the whole thing you said you're rewriting it. are you kidding me
ShadowSix66 chapter 1 . 7/30/2023
like 3 years after reading this story I just realized some of the things you used in this story are from Berserk
Pont1ac-Band1t chapter 35 . 7/28/2023
I was enjoying this story and i get to the final chapter to find out you are rewriting it?! What a fucking waste of my time.
generator375 chapter 7 . 7/28/2023
I don’t understand what kind of 76 year old guy who worked with the gods, who can be said to have been betrayed to agree to one ANY THING !
Pont1ac-Band1t chapter 23 . 7/27/2023
What happened to thst silver eagle he had? Is it dead?
Type-Saturn chapter 4 . 7/3/2023
So is there a reason why Percy didn’t use those bonus points to already buy the ‘perks’ that Gaia bought for him, because it just sounds like lazy writing to me at this point
Type-Saturn chapter 3 . 7/3/2023
You have managed to ruin a story with needless angst and unreliable powerscaling, with Perseus being absolutely cuck like in his attitude when his mother died when he had the option of using the Greek style skill that would up the power and probably kill a lot of the bandits. At least put some effort into the plot points as you could easily give him the skill after he was captured in the arena as before then he never even uses it. Also your grammar and punctuation is all over the place and makes this look like a story a 12 year old made. At least either have someone go over what you have written or download something like grammerly. I was hoping that this story would get any better but at this point I don’t think it will
LongSongSilver chapter 19 . 6/17/2023
of course, the forced berserk parallels continue. lovely.
LongSongSilver chapter 18 . 6/17/2023
The quest rewards said it was a legendary sword, the random box was marked with a sword, and it dropped a staff...wtf.
LongSongSilver chapter 13 . 6/16/2023
is it intentional that they keep using the term "genisis" instead of "genius" ?
LongSongSilver chapter 12 . 6/16/2023
I will never understand this obsession with fingerless gloves. it's like generic MC fashion 101, you must wear practically useless fingerless gloves.
LongSongSilver chapter 3 . 6/15/2023
That time skip seems a bit superfluous, first it's a skip then immediately back to the past to talk about everything that was skipped over.

Also, it seems like a waste to rip off Berserk but not go all the way and make it a full Percy Jackson x Berserk novel with a gamer system. At this point it's a well past an Easter egg/cameo but not a true cross over since lots of things have been changed.
LongSongSilver chapter 2 . 6/15/2023
"Since war broke out between the two kingdoms for it you could so nobody has the time to explore it."

I can usually figure out what some butchered sentence is trying to say but this one is pretty much unintelligible.
KalebShannon chapter 11 . 5/25/2023
it's $1,053,630,829
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