Reviews for Percy Jackson The Dark Gamer
ReadersCantRead chapter 35 . 3/14/2023
Oh God the nostalgia, specifically that I had no idea you were rewriting true child. I might have to check that out, one of the first fics I ever read. Man.
INFUSCATE chapter 35 . 3/14/2023
Damn, I saw this had updated and immediately got hyped, but I'm even more hyped for a brand new rewrite!
Tom12aj chapter 34 . 3/11/2023
FINALLY IT HAS UPDATED. Last time I read this story there was only 29 chapters. Love your story. Keep up the good work.
Awesomesauce chapter 34 . 3/5/2023
Next chappppp!
Fredward1 chapter 13 . 3/4/2023
I call that unnecessary plot development. It came out of nowhere and it’s just annoying. Could’ve just sent him on a quest or something but no. Random dude falls from the sky, sees him, wants to kill him. No rhyme or reason. Just random asf and it’s all about his past and who he is. Now we’re gonna have an arc about his past and whatnot that came out of nowhere because you’ve been moving the story really slowly and then decided to kick it up 30 notches
Fredward1 chapter 13 . 3/4/2023
Crap pacing. It’s like a driver that just coasts, comes to a stop and then floors it for no reason.
Fredward1 chapter 12 . 3/4/2023
Again with expositions that make him look stupid. He’s taking all these classes. How has he not learned anything? How is he so incompetent with the things he has? This is stupid. Come on man. There’s no need to have someone constantly explaining stuff while Percy just sits there listening and going “wow is it really that useful” or something like that every time. Have him explain it himself or have people around him talk about it. He’s just sitting there looking stupid, not knowing that what he has is rare. It’s a fucking legendary item just sitting in your inventory. Learn about it in your free time
Fredward1 chapter 12 . 3/4/2023
For a “dark gamer” Percy is way too happy go lucky
Fredward1 chapter 11 . 3/4/2023
Oh my goooooood. No it would be fine if he was in a relationship with his spirit smh. You never said it was wrong once. My god this whole forcing plot by making him stupid is annoying. Paying the principal, not being able to recognize what’s going on around him, not learning about the world, now being forced into a fake relationship with the cliche of it becoming real soon? Ugh come on man. You’re better than that
Fredward1 chapter 9 . 3/4/2023
Making the mc dumb for an exposition is poor writing in my mind especially when he’s supposed to be smart. There’s tons of other ways to explain the position he’s in without making Percy look dumb. Like him inferring it based off of listening to people talk in the background or Gaia and him talking about it and him understanding it. Instead you have him incredibly confused and letting the principal or anyone else to just lead him to an answer they want him to find. It’s bad and stupid and makes Percy look braindead. He’s getting led by the nose by these people when he should be at least able to counter and come up with the answers based off of little info.
Fredward1 chapter 9 . 3/4/2023
Why is he so dumb? He’s like 80 years old mentally and was married to a daughter of Athena for 50 years. He should be smarter than this
Jet22345 chapter 34 . 3/2/2023
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee nowww I need more
Seimika chapter 19 . 3/2/2023
Well...fuck don't know if I want to read this after Percy lost an arm
Seimika chapter 2 . 2/28/2023
So is this a shield hero crossover? I've been trying to figure out what world this is and this stupid mobile is limiting...
nasapeepolover116 chapter 18 . 2/27/2023
that would be a little over 21 billion
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