|Reviews for The pick up|
| KkMarie9005 chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
ok me gawd...that was freaking cute and...dam...I loved it so much...
| Amandineylan chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
This is just... Awwww...
| LeeshyLoo chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
That was sweet! Me likey :D
| sleepless-royalty chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
This is so adorable I can't even begin to express how adorable I think this is.
| BradbabyBrandon chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
Loved it . Wayyyyy better than wat I originally had in mind
| Dark Shining Light chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
Awwwwww what a cute story and it makes me wish there was more. like I'm imagining all the adventures Lucy can have in this new town, with Natsu by her side of course. You did another great job with this one :)
| Animemama328 chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
That was sooo cute I loved it I hope you will continue this.
| Phiafairy chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
this was so cute. a little cinnamon roll Natsu.
| Haruka Shinonono chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
aawwwwwwwwwww love it
| drummergal07 chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
I enjoyed reading this. Nice writing!
| Barbatos rex chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
really cool story