BEST INSULT CHAIN EVER

that streaming thing reminds me of a one-shot fic I read awhile back l

Just by seeing some of the dialogue, you can tell that this author has seen SAO abridged on youtube by Somethung Witty Entertainment. I would like to say, this fic is fantastic, and I eagerly await the next update. I love it that people can take an idea, that while good in theory, was fleshed out rather poorly, and put their own unique twists, turns, plot elements, and the like into it and come back with something amazing. This is something that you have done extraordinarily well, and I thank you for your contributions to literature as a whole.

Star Wars Legends is FAR superior to canon.

Ah man, this is STILL one of my fav SAO fics. So good.

I just discovered this you as an author today with this fic. Love I so far. I look forward to the next chapter and seeing how the world move forward. Off to see what else you have written.

Apparently fem kirito means extrovert kirito

I got an AU idea from this chappie- what if Kayaba was actually Kirito (or Keiko)’s dad? Amnesia or something, link in the death of his (or her) parents… I think there’s lot of potential, plus Dad!Kayaba fits like it was made to, you have to agree.

Kayaba is a troll and I love it

When the Madman who trapped you and thousands of others in a VRMMO decides to give you a shovel talk-

Cute

I love your portrayal of Kayaba. I don’t know why I find him so damn amusing! Lol

Ugh Nobuyuki is disgusting. Can’t wait til Keiko ends him

I can't help but read it in the abridged voice...

an absolutely hilarious read. with actual character development with skewed morals. I love it