|Reviews for After the Fall|
| Ada1229 chapter 1 . 8/26
k 1. stupid afterlife rules are stupid. Lily's Harry's mum, and after all the crap Fate put him through you'd think she'd have whoever ran the afterlife bend the rules a bit so Harry can have time and mabye an embrace or 2 from his mum.
2. How is Harry's obvious connection to Tom explained if he's not a Horcrux. Saying they're connected by Fate or leaving the reader to assume such a thing seems kinda sketchy to me
Sorry, apparently apparently I've decided to become a fanfiction critic -_-;
| I'm always mad at him chapter 15 . 8/13
It's been a long time but I hope your muse returns.
| Christa chapter 15 . 8/8
Please continue the story
| guest chapter 15 . 7/27
His solution for the second task was...
Imaginative. I liked it. Hopefully, you'll add a chapt. or three before too long.
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 2 . 7/25
Harry's got to feel the drag about this. Hopefully, Harmione is still in his corner.
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 7/25
A good introduction to what is essentially a R28 story. I think Harry made the right choice, knowledge can lead him to help. You have me hooked.
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/19
I loved your solution to the problem, getting Dobby to retrieve Hermione from the lake was a stroke of genius. Please update this great story!
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/19
It looks like the old fool has got it in his mind to keep control of the situation. Harry is going to surprise him.
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/19
Well changing history is the biggest part of the story so I say go for it.
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/19
I love this, it can't get any better than that
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/19
Yes Hermione is quite clever, but in this case I would say that Harry has the upper hand,
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/6
This is great Ron's is again going to show his true colors and cause a scene. Please, please, pretty please update this soon.
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/6
Hermione is yet to be explained to by Dobby about the elves and winky. I think it would be important.
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/6
Date please was the only thing I would want with Hermione Granger If I were alone with her
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/6
It's great I'd love to see Ron's face if he knew Harry was from the future. I love it!