Reviews for Lessons From a Grateful Veela |
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N7sdr93 chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 Read it all in one sitting. I love it! I can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon! |
Tarix chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 Awesome so far, hope Harry moves to France. Still you should start to feature other characters more, because at the moment only Harry and Fleur's characters feel like real people. |
PaC chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 Good decision, not jamming Hermione into their bed. In some of many never finished or shared flurry fics, some of your ideas, themes, handling of things ... not twins or dupes, but could say are cousins of what are in some of my flurry fics. Tis nice change from past couple years of Fleur and Daphne fanfic mold, where the bitchhole dug for their intro is so deep they, IMO are never cleansed of how vile or plain bitch-unlikeable they are early in the fics. McD part unclear. No need like the canon "remedial potions", for meeting with Harry. She either oddly was putting on quite an angry act. Or what is more logical, Minerva caved, backed down from actual detention in the face of all the support Harry was given So, how few see it like me? I'd predict most don't, and thought the detention was fake at the start. Without some hints contrary, I feel the portrayal is dead on that Minerva was being an ass, who later backed down. If that WAS the author intention, some not too subtle clues/hints I think should be added. Ditto for the opposite, Oscar winning Minerva not angry and not ever actually giving a detention, drop in hints to show THAT was the case. Leaving the few supportive students behind is one small negative possible regret for a RARE, Harry exits Hogwarts ... and UK. An unsupportive, spineless staff(professors), gives Harry more incentive, less regrets, for cutting free of Hogwarts. Last, there is option for Harry to self study snd afford tutors for help. particularly practicals. Really, how much waste of tuition galleons for ... Binns, Trewalnry, Quirelle, Flophart, SNAPE ... SNAPE ... SNAPE... HERE IS ONE of my gags: Tuition isn't late paid for a few days or weeks into September. Whether trouble transferring, to maybe just wanting to show up to see how bad his 5th year could have been. Not intending to enroll or stay, Harry shows up pretending he's attending a 5th year at Hogwarts...until he exits, with or sans explanation... perhaps being most rude to some, like Snape and Umbitch, ignoring detentions, maybe some Draco and other mini-DEs getting smackdowns. Imagine the joy of NOT having the pink toad trying to fuck him over all year...when he exits Hogwarts after a week or so, deleriously happy he made the right decision to not attend another year there. Also, consider option to make Fleur a 6th year, and/or turn 16 or 17 on Oct 31, 17 for a just in time "legal" champion requirement. Narrows the age gap a little. Plus, options for Beaubaton to offer post 7th year classes or mastery level coursework. PS for ANY FLEUR POTRAYAL AUTHORS. Finding nothing good to read last week, reread jberns Lies I've Lived. For all the recent super uber arrogant French BITCH portrayals in recent years. Jbern demonstrates how to near but not cross the line, to not dig too deep a bottomless bitch hole for Fleur to be unable to overcome for readers with actual memory recall ability. Maybe all who attempt writing a Flurry fic intending a bitchy Fleur start, should first read jbern's Fleur. I never wrote the omake, or fanfic of the jbern Potter fic. But the Luna in the Jungle tomb raider fics was too negative a Luna for me, despite poor Luna's suffering ... so many multi and Harem fics ... wanted to make real Fleur's threat to claim Harry if Luna didn't smarten up. Wanted to write what never see, a witch getting a multi, Fleur acting on her threat, Fleur with a two wizard ménage a trois. Good luck, whether you end it soon or go LONG ... |
doenerkint chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 Taking an interesting approach. It's not unique and it's not out of this world but it is solid, logical and very grown up you could say. Moving in favor of a relationship when everybody is against it is no-brainer. Well, keep going. Let's see what beauxbatons has to offer for the two of them. More more...nom nom. (o) |
MrTwistr chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 Im pretty sure this is Fleur's last year at her school? Considering she was with Bill in Ootp im pretty sure she graduated. Still great stuff though and im really REALLY looking forward to more chapters...there arent enough good Harry/Fleur romance fics. |
Tarix chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 Naughty, but beautiful chapter. |
MrTwistr chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 This is way too good to confine to a mere one-shot. |
Dault3883 Barron Backslash chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 good chapter please update again soon |
discb chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 Cool fic |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 Very good |
M.D.G1986 chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 Excellent chapter I feel... very entertaining and advances the story at a good pace... I hope for more soon |
Bountyhunter1977 chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 the Hogwarts staff really dose not do there jobs when its about punishing other students and more to the point pure bloods i am surprised they have not been accused of being blood purest bigots them self s. its about time he gets some extra training. Sure let Harry leave England for France i am sure Dumbledore will approve lol That man needs to but out Harry s life. |
Bountyhunter1977 chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 i wonder if The experience of Harry throw off her allure would help Harry with other types of mind magic. I also liked how he pointed out that even if he can throw it off its not fast enough as some would take advantage of that brief moment. I wonder How the soul fragment in his scare will react. this is one one of my favorite pairings right now. Now Hermione always irritated me as she like to show off her knowledge and dose not know the meaning of privacy unless its her own privacy. |
Temporal Knight chapter 2 . 5/28/2016 Another excellent chapter! It's nice to see the progress of their relationship and Harry was very sweet throughout. I liked Hermione much more in this chapter than the first though Ron is as much of an idiot as usual. The shopping trip was also very nice. I look forward to seeing where things go! |
doenerkint chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 More please, please write a story based on this or something with the same writer's ability you just put to paper. I love HP/ FD stories and good ones are rare. please please please more! |