Reviews for Lessons From a Grateful Veela |
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Sottunar chapter 1 . 5/22/2016 Please continue this. I might be able to let my imagination run wild and let itgo wherever it wants to go but I want to hear your version of where it goes. |
red-jacobson chapter 1 . 5/22/2016 Very nice, a good bit of plot and character development for what I expected to simply be a PWP like so many others I'd read before using the same starting point. As for what happens next, I would certainly be interested in seeing what you think happened, but I'd like to see Cho apologize for not being able to be his date for the Yule Ball, and Harry using what he learned to cheer her up again *GRIN* I'd rather not see him with Hermione, simply because I've gotten tired of the two of them together, but that's just my personal opinion. Anyway, fun little story and I'm going to check and see if you've written anything else Red |
CallMeMatrix chapter 1 . 5/22/2016 I vote for more |
Sk8ernv chapter 1 . 5/22/2016 I normally don't do one shots. However, this was great. i would love to see how this one turns out. |
Sang28 chapter 1 . 5/22/2016 Enjoyed your story a lot. Would love to see a sequel to it. I personally would think that this encounter would give Harry a boost to his confidence and a lot of the girls he know would respond to it. Think he would also realize he didn't treat his date for the ball with respect and apologize and things would go from there. |
Ronin Kenshin chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 haha that was great a good one shot that could be a full fic if ya wanted it to be great work |
Adol116 chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 Good story looking forward to more of your work |
roger9481 chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 Write the next chapter |
BiGDeal chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 A nice well-written tale. Ecchi more than smut and it's fun to see that your Harry is a classic gentleman of discretion. Going to follow you and this story. |
BiGDeal chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 A very well-written tale with a classic cliff-hanger at the end. Nice to see that |
Gensplejs chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 Argh... please More |
Ollivander7 chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 I hope you continue. I like to think Harry isn't done with Fleur and wants more than just a fling. |
Alex chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 Go ahead and write the rest. It looks like you had fun with it. |
Shadowz101 chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 Great One shot. You actually made a short story here that while containing lemons was actually tasteful and non-gratuitous (and not taking up 90% of the chapter). It was perfect tbh. I actually wish this was a full story since there are so few decent Harry/Fleur stories on this site that I've not read that it would be nice for a fresh take. The way it ended kinda looked like Harry was developing small feelings for her (I say small cos part of it is probably that she's a sexy french veela) and it could have progressed later on. Would have been funny if months laters Fleur realizes that he's actually worth sticking with. Maybe Harry plays the field a bit and comes back to her who knows. Like you said we can all come to our own conclusions. Please write the follow up. I'm sure none of us readers will complain. Like I said there are not many decent H/F stories I've not read. |
timkhj chapter 1 . 5/20/2016 Great little fic! Enjoyable read! Congratulations on writing a fulfilling conclusion that also left everything wide open and available. :) |