Taking smeones control is taking someones control. Is tying someone up and forcing them to have sex with you symbiotic just because their bodies may get pleasure out of it? No, it is still rape. Coercion at the least.

Really awesome story! Loved the plot intermixed with the fluff and the changes made to canon. Hermione perhaps feels like a third wheel but still a great story!
Cannot wait to see when you update the sequel since it's been a while

Amazing story, off to read the sequel!

nice story

Nice story.

Harry Potter, you lucky dog! you bagged Fleur !

I dunno if you wanted it this way, but it definitely feels like rape. Hell, simply reverse their genders, and it gives me the creeps.
I mean Harry is very reluctant to participate in this, and Fleur is using her Allure for crumbling the reluctance, in fact he gets up many a times with the clear intention of leaving.
Rape is not exclusive to one particular sex, and shouldn't be seen as such.

I feel like the Harmony part was almost obligatory; I enjoyed the Flarry pary more.

Maybe Harry should imagine a snake and speak to Fleur's core?

I have found that I prefer Hermiony better than Fleur for Harry. I guess it's their shared history.

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story .

"I just don't want people talking about you, calling you the boy who sleeps with Veela or something," Hermione was thankful for the cover of darkness hiding most of her furious blush.

Interesting. Harry is nicer than I would have been. I'd have told her that no one would have even known he'd slept with Fleur if she hadn't stuck her nose into his business, since he hadn't planned on telling anyone. Fleur probably hadn't, either, until Hermione began acting so pissy. This nosiness into Harry's personal business is one of Hermione's character flaws that I fine excruciatingly annoying.

I'm curious. Would McGonagall's "un"detention have been the same without all of the others accompanying Harry? Or did she change it because the number of responsible students who were supporting him made her realize she had been derelict in her duties in not punishing Draco and in not rewarding Harry for doing what was honorable? I didn't think anything Harry said was rude. Spot on, yes. Rude? No. He didn't call them names or use profanity. He simply said their behavior disgusted him, and I can't say that was worth detention.

I wish Madam Maxime would have done something to Snape and Ferret-face. They deserved it.

I greatly enjoyed this story, but this chapter was a shit-show. Why bother with writing it at all if you're just going to rush through it so quickly?

Great story. Love the pairing and I’m glad that Harry got to go to France.

Glad that Cedric survive and kind of became a hero for the feeding the dark Lord to.

Glorious! Keep it up!