Nice job on this story and the one-shot!

I would have posted this as a separate story...kind of disrupts the H/F path of the core story. Still probably can given that its onlyh been a few hours...

What no ménage à trois?! after the other 3 chapters?

that was sweet and perfect.

A point: Ron has _arachnophobia_. Acrophobia is a fear of heights (like I have)...

Otherwise, liked the chapter

I really enjoyed this story, Thanks for Writing!

Loved the story! I wonder if Cedric was also born as the seventh month died? Anyways, thanks for sharing it with us.

Loved it. Thanks for writing

Thank you for sharing.

A very nice story. It flows well and has a believable story line. Thanks for your creativity and hard work.

Magnificent. Utterly magnificent. The romance was great, the plot was engaging, and the pacing was spot on. I absolutely loved it.

Ghuuuuu! Wow.. awesome story :)

Amazing job ! There are so many terrible Harry/Fleur stories around here... I thought I'd never find a good one, but that was before I stumbled upon yours. It's tricky to write a tasteful M-rated fanfic, especially when it involves someone who's basically a succubus, but you pulled if off with great talent. Bonus points for your French (as a French native, the Google translated garbage usually found in Fleur stories is insufferable) and your very readable version of butchered English ! Bravo :)

I really enjoyed this. You don't really see the Harry/Fleur pairing all that often (or at least not being the sole one), especially one as well-written as this. I actually do hope you make just one more chapter, though. Kind of an epilogue where Harry looks back on his life and thinks about all that happened from the end of fourth year to his present. Or maybe Harry goes to Dumbledore's death bed, where the old man tries to draw Harry back into his plans one last time, thinking he can use guilt to achieve his ends, only for Harry to rebuff him and reveal that he had never needed to fight Voldemort due to the Horcruxes all being found while the man was still a wraith and were destroyed - causing Voldemort to no longer have any anchors holding him to this world. I don't know. Just something to consider. The more ambiguous ending is good and all, but it might make people think you are coming back to make a sequel - which, if that is your intention, then feel free to ignore my ramblings.

Either way, awesome job.

Thanks for an enjoyable story!