Reviews for What They All Want
Cami of Queenscove chapter 1 . 1/23/2003
Gah. I'm an idiot.

I think I put Garvey instead of Vinson. I feel like a complete and total moron, like the time I put Trisono instead of Tsair for some mage in one of the stories... and it was my friend's story, which made me feel worse... but whatever. Need to go now. Bye hun.

Love,

Cami
Cami of Queenscove chapter 1 . 1/23/2003
Aww... what's going to happen? I mean... I never liked Garvey to being with, but this is a different side to him you're portraying. I can't wait for the next couple of chapters. You write it well, you just might want to put spaces between paragraphs to make it easier to read. Other than that, it was excellent. Update soon.

Love,

Cami
Keita chapter 1 . 1/23/2003
Wow. That was GOOD! What fresh take on a character! What a unique way to see the slums of Corus! Amazing idea! I commend your writing!

:oD
18 | « Prev Page 1 2