Reviews for Break of Day
Melissa0603 chapter 1 . 8/25/2018
Sweet and smutty,LOVED IT! So in character, great job
Jbug47 chapter 1 . 6/20/2018
A great story! Thanks!
EllaNight chapter 1 . 7/16/2017
trash. I am absolute trash for this. And it's my new head canon so thank you. My god that was so hot, I can't even put it into words. It's so beautiful. Alright, I'm going for a cold shower now!
remadora-ftw chapter 1 . 5/22/2017
yes I like this mhm it's very good

I esecially love the declaration of love from both of them omg that was very nice and good and wonderful hehe yes yes very good

-Anja
ldsarfaty1 chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
I absolutely loved it, it's one of the best stories.
Ky03elk chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
"Anything you desire this morning, I'm happy to do it for you." And hot damn wasn't that true!
thanks
mobazan27 chapter 1 . 6/16/2016
Judas H. Priest! This was some wonderful and decadent kind of smut; the best one ever.
So yummy and nutritious too.
May have to re-read a few times to check for grammatical errors, run on sentences etc ...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
Wow

Hot hot hot

Definitely should have been said then :))
Definitely a missing scene , oh yea

Hot hot hot Kate and Rick

Thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2016
hot!
tshlw chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
Hot, hot, hot. Loved their banter and dirty talk. Need a cold shower now. LOL Thanks for writing.
Midnight Caller chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
Excellent! :)
Pears61 chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
Delicious. Best way to start the day :)
aprilp2a chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
Beautiful story. You really captured the characters emotions.
1822andallthat chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
Superb mix of emotions and hotness. :-)
FuelDH206 chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
I'm all flushed and tingly after this one. Holy hell, what a way to start the day (for me and them)
Loved it..

Mindy
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