|Reviews for Harriet Potter and the Digital Adventure|
| Ada1229 chapter 4 . 10/11
Phew. Yaaaaaaay, Blue Coredramon!
| Ada1229 chapter 1 . 10/11
Eugh, I just looked up Dracomon and his evolutions. He has 2 chioces of champion levels, Coredramon (Blue) and Coredramon (Green). Blue looks waaaaaaaay better, Green just looks like someone vomited on him and his Mega evolution, Groundramon looks like he just possessed a CAT machine Track Excavator.
I hope you go with the Blue Coredramon evolution line
| musicluver246 chapter 7 . 7/7
Great story so far.
| noorootruter chapter 1 . 7/2
| Hades Darkstar chapter 7 . 6/30
If you still have not found a way to watch digimon, go to to watch digimon. I look forward to reading your story.
| animerule64 chapter 7 . 6/22
Add more chapters please
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/19
You should study a bit more about English writing, because your sentence structures suck real bad... you should find a Beta reader to help you ASAP.
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/19
This story has lots of potential, but your development of the plot is freakin awful!
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/19
Terrible grammar... I am still confused as hell by Harriet. She acts nothing like an abused child... I don’t understand, seriously.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
Harriet is annoying... I expected an abused child to be less of a brat. She’s a contradiction and honestly, her personality needs lots of work. The chapter was boring and the narrative didn’t flow well at all.
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/23/2019
I think... Harriet had unknowing speak Parseltounge at Seasron. Yikes.
| Dark Neko 4000 chapter 7 . 12/20/2019
Was that Remus?
What will happen next time
| Argonaut986 chapter 7 . 12/18/2019
The my anime list website has a watch feature. Is the man Remus?
| Aeonmaster Aeroza chapter 7 . 12/18/2019
Well, firstly, your ideas seem good but why not a “Female” OC Horocux Digimon? Also, there are some terms to the staying as such, so why not two weeks as a flaw in Dumbles Plans, and also, you need to know that there is more then just Seasons 1 and 2, as there is 3 more to go, alongside some of the games (which I think Digimon World 3 might work).
Besides that, I was thinking maybe some Digimon managed to enter the human world in disguise, and this may seems weird as an idea, but why not Harriet secretly being half-digimon? As I was thinking about Lily being a former Digimon made fully Human by Dumbledore forcing a Full Blood Adoption as such to the Evans Family from a tip, years ago, by a mysterious deer of sorts.
So for Lucimon, why not also include the other sins as well, and their virtues also, and maybe have Lily being a secret child between Lilithmon and Seraphimon, or Ophanimon and Lucimon to have her gain cat traits of sorts?
And above all else, I do wonder what you will pull off, but make sure to AU it a bit while keeping to the series/movies, as I oddly see a specific Digimon from the “Revenge of Diaboromon” gaining independence and staying with Harriet as a female, OC based, Digimon line.. Maybe a virus-like, human-based, female drake species mixed.
| Yuu101cutie chapter 6 . 11/28/2019
Update soon please... Lol it's nearly the year and half you joked about at the end of this chapter.
I would like to see where you are going with this and if you'll give Harri a crest or not.
Also when has she meet digimon in the past? After all she did make the comment earlier about digivolving. Also... It's funny how the kids don't pick up on stuff she's saying. Is she speaking Jap or Eng?
UPDATE PLEASE! With sugar on top.