Poor Narcissa... Keep in mind that she's a Black and their mental stability is...fragile, plus there's no telling what she might have been cursed with by Tom.

Cute date, love how they made it fun even with the photogs.

9-11 was the day American freedom was killed by fearful, small-minded bigots - both foreign and American.

Narcissa sounds mentally unbalanced.

Ugh, Rita... So, so Rita...

Well it's not like Harry or Ron have been around for Hermione to tell them anything, so...

Marriage contracts take the spontaneity out of the relationship but they do provide protections. Although I do wonder what supposedly would happen if either Draco or Hermione just up and left after graduation instead of getting married. No one has said.

Eh, I don't like when no one can bring Hermione's parents' memories back. It's just too sad.

Eh, readers don't need a Book of Spells in every chapter; it's by far enough that "what the spell does" is discussed. Very good "actually getting to know ya" chapter.

I always felt Minerva was probably offered Slytherin during her own sorting.

Poor Hermione...too much is changing too much and now it's time for school.

Draco's totally gone for that ring... And at this point I do think magic took "intention" into account - Draco's intention...

...oops?

Ohhh - great intro!

What a fantastic story! I’ve never read anything like it before. I applaud your writing skills and your imagination. I look forward to reading your other works.
Robin