Reviews for Trunk's Vengence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This seems a bit like Seven Deadly Sins, no? |
![]() ![]() ![]() that waz good,but u could lay off a little on the cussing |
![]() ![]() *shocked* wow...That was really good...I don't know why...but I liked it...I guess i'm in one of those angsty moods...but...wow... |
![]() ![]() Wow. wow. i must say that was awsome. geez. a wee bit scary too. can you do me a favor though? Can you please read my fic? i need some reviews. i don't have much. i need to know how my story ids going. plesae. thanx. great fic and i will take the advice too. |
![]() ![]() this is a good fanfic. and it is true..i have a hard time controling my desire for vengence take over me. i hope you will write more stories. |
![]() ![]() WOW! That was brilliant. You had me going there until the end. Your advice at the end is so true. Please write more. |
![]() ![]() THAT WAS F***ING BRILLIANT! DOWN WITH PIKEETA! UP WITH TRUNKS! That was very good, but SERIOSLY messed up! Who would think that Trunks, of all people, would murder his family? That was twisted! |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa...scary...*shivers* |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! Great story! |
![]() ![]() This is the BEST fanfic ever written! You have to write more stories like this. I love the lesson that it teaches and David, i figure that you'll become a very good writer one day. I am always looking for worthy rivals and you are it! I hope that I'll get to see more of your writing! _ ~Takuya |
![]() ![]() Ooooo...another one of your great fics! For a second I thought it was all real. If that was true, Trunks would be out of character. (specially Future Trunks). None the less, it was a great fic. I also love how you have those morals at the end of your fics. |
![]() ![]() Poor Trunks! Please make a sequel this was really good! But don't kill the family next time Kay? lol. (p.s. I love how you put the moral to the story!)-Amber- |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, how creepy... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! That was so horrifying! I love Vegeta... Why did you kill him? *sniff sniff* Anyway, that was well done~! I hope you continue~!(- |
![]() ![]() wow...impressive. sad,yet wuz very emotional but i dont get the machine nice obviously talented! :) |