|Reviews for Once Is All It Takes|
| Random SUA Dreamer chapter 8 . 9/2/2011
This is not accurate and I could only get this far. I'm nearly crying. My mom was going to adopt this one baby but then his/her mother aborted it. That woman and that doctor killed my little brother/sister.
I am only 8 inches long
but I have all my organs.
I love the sound of your voice.
Every time I hear it
I wave my arms and legs.
The sound of your heart beat
is my favorite lullaby.
today I learned how to suck my thumb.
If you could see me
you could definitely tell that I am a baby.
I'm not big enough to survive outside my home though.
It is so nice and warm in here.
You know what Mommy
I'm a boy!
I hope that makes you happy.
I always want you to be happy.
I don't like it when you cry.
You sound so sad.
It makes me sad too
and I cry with you even though
you can't hear me.
my hair is starting to grow.
It is very short and fine
but I will have a lot of it.
I spend a lot of my time exercising.
I can turn my head and curl my fingers and toes
and stretch my arms and legs.
I am becoming quite good at it too.
You went to the doctor today.
Mommy, he lied to you.
He said that I'm not a baby.
I am a baby Mommy, your baby.
I think and feel.
Mommy, what's abortion?
I can hear that doctor again.
I don't like him.
He seems cold and heartless.
Something is intruding my home.
The doctor called it a needle.
Mommy what is it? It burns!
Please make him stop!
I can't get away from it!
Mommy! HELP me!
I am okay.
I am in Jesus's arms.
He is holding me.
He told me about abortion.
Why didn't you want me Mommy?
Every Abortion Is Just . . .
One more heart that was stopped.
Two more eyes that will never see.
Two more hands that will never touch.
Two more legs that will never run.
One more mouth that will never speak.
| Alexxx22 chapter 12 . 7/9/2010
That was really sad. When she got the abortion, my jaw dropped. I thought this was going to be really predictable, but you changed the plot up. good work!
| Mizzkk chapter 12 . 2/28/2009
great story love the ending!
| PaceyW'sgirl chapter 12 . 10/27/2008
pretty good story.
| xMrs.Gregory.Housex chapter 12 . 7/6/2008
It is extremely unlikely that Elliot would have forgave Olivia for getting an aportion. Especially since he is Catholic and Catholics do no support or agree with abortion under any circumstance because they believe no matter how the life was concieved it still has a quality of life.
Either way I read it through and thought it was pretty good.
| pinkydog123 chapter 8 . 4/15/2008
wait what? and elliot dosnt even care? well, ok, i guess this is suppose to be different...
| pinkydog123 chapter 7 . 4/15/2008
how could you have her get an abortion?
| pinkydog123 chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
god, this is good _
| tanya2byour21 chapter 12 . 6/11/2007
Great story and I loved it.
| Spuds chapter 5 . 3/27/2007
Uh...you've got some medical info completely wrong. With the almighty power of Google, and less than 5 minutes of searching, I found this basic info on home pregnancy tests and puking/morning sickness:
(Home Pregnancy Tests)
"Home pregnancy tests measure the presence of a telltale hormone in your urine called human chorionic gonadotropin (hCG). This hormone, produced by cells from the placenta, first gets into your bloodstream when the fertilized egg implants in your uterus (about six days after fertilization). The amount of hCG in your body then increases rapidly over the next few weeks, doubling in amount about every two days. By 14 days after fertilization (about the time you would expect your period), some home pregnancy tests may be able to detect the hormone in your urine and give you a positive result. But in spite of their claims, most are not sensitive enough to guarantee you an accurate result at this point. In fact, you're much more likely to get an accurate result if you wait until a week after your expected period before testing. "
(Morning sickness/General pukiness)
"Nausea and vomiting can be one of the first signs of pregnancy and usually begins around the 6th week of pregnancy. It can occur at any time of the day, and for most women it seems to stop around the 12th week of pregnancy."
| Kawaiililkitten chapter 4 . 9/26/2006
I like your story...but I must protest at Olivia's oh-so-quick morning sickness. Women can't detect their pregnancy using a pregnancy test until a week before their missed period, at the EARLIEST. Most women are fertile at 2 weeks after their last period, so the earliest she could have taken a test would be 7-10 days after she had sex, not 5...and she certainly wouldn't have morning sickness at 4 days. Google or wiki it, accuracy is important as a writer
| Delila07 chapter 12 . 8/9/2005
That was a good story. Even though I am not to sure that Elliot would be soo understanding about Olivia having an abortion with his child. It was still good though
| ObSeSsEdWiThSvU chapter 12 . 8/3/2005
| davideonarine chapter 12 . 6/2/2005
that was so nice
| rosa lunae chapter 12 . 5/28/2005
Great story, gals! I wasn't expecting any action like that when I read the summary, but I'd never seen a story with Olivia and an unplanned pregnancy. Very interesting. I like how you wrote it. You wrote on a controversy without being biased, and that takes some serious skill. And this story kept my nose inches from the screen. A few times I had to remember to breathe. Great story!