'Better to reign in hell' is not some motivational quote, it's fucking Lucifer saying that? How is that convincing? And she's not going to reign, she's going to be among people that fucking despise her. 'Better to serve among people that think I am dirt than join with people that actively fight to stop people like me from being treated like slaves' because a couple kids in her year are mean to her.

Love how in this story the 'Light' (because of course they're called Light/Dark like some fucking anime, do they also wear badges saying 'I'm a bad guy!') is somehow also worse for muggleborns. Like fuck sake, this isn't blurring the lines or whatever it's just illogical.

Love how he tackles Alexander instead of just using magic. Really great stuff totally believable not at all infuriating to read. Kind of just goes to show that this character is really underwhelming for a Dark Lord when compared to Voldemort. There is no fucking way that guy would tackle someone?

Thank god we reached the canon station of Sirius going through the veil. I do not know how I would have coped without it.

They could not possibly think they were subtle enough that she wouldn't notice?

James again does not act like a real person lol. Does he just not give a shit that his wife tried to kill him? He's not broken up at all, he's going to prison to gloat. Like, what does this man care about?..

James does not come across as a real person. I suppose when you have a dumbass prompt like 'Loving parents abandon child for no reason' you have to have dumbasses justifying it.

And there's just no guilt. It's retarded.

People that are supposed to be subservient to him constantly forcing his hand.

God I could get over the constant canon rehashing if his relationships with the other main characters wasn't so fucking nauseating. I want a story where they serve a fucking Dark Lord, not play house with their feelings.

Their romance is so ass, and she hasn't done anything to remotely be considered his 'equal'. The only fucking thing you ever say about her is that she's hot. Like?

I was really enjoying this story till you did daphne dirty like that. Such a shame

just have to say you sure do have a way of making one hate james potter lol

Oh Sirius

That’s a lie! Theo was definitely checking Hermione!

I love that Hadrian doesn’t think Draco deserves Hermione

Go Daphne, I’m so proud of you and your Olivia Pope moment!

Draco finally acted on his feelings

That’s not true, Lily recognized him

"I'm sorry James... But this is for the Great Good."