Aww! haven't read fanfics for a loooong time now, but just found this!
It was really great! I kept thinking that T and Z were dead, for like the first half.. is that what you WANTED us to think? ;)
Anyways, very well written, but no surprise there! Loved it! :)

Fabulous

Wow. This was beautiful. Thanks for writing.

Oh I really loved this. It was so so perfect. Wonderful.

This is such a different take, and I love it!

I don't know if this is weird, but I actually appreciate the fact that you didn't really try to explain Ziva's reason for not telling Tony about Tali. I honestly hated that part of the episode so much because I personally just can't imagine that happening. I've been reading some fix-it, fluffy fics that directly attempt to reason it, and nothing wrong with their writing at all, it just doesn't have the right effect on me.

I love the touch of their kids and Tali's kid have undeniably Jewish names. And this being told through Tali feels like a nice, lovely epilogue. Thank you for coming out again to tell this story! xo

This was great! Well written and I enjoyed all the little snippets in time you give through Tali's recollections. Thanks for fixing what the writers broke with Tony's exit. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Love this story.

I love this! This is my head canon. Thank you so much for fixing what the writers screwed up. If you ever consider writing a multi chapter fic that encompasses the reunion and their life after, you'll have a faithful reader in me. I am very much intrigued by how you'd write it.

Thank you for sharing! Love your work, as you know. :)