Reviews for Hidden Revelation
James Birdsong chapter 7 . 9/20/2009
Good story.
Frankie Hess chapter 6 . 10/25/2004
That was an awesome story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Kai seems like a great character but what is his persona? Just keep writing and I'll be here to read it!
personaX chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
I Like Your story. Please Write More Because I Want To Read Update The Fic As Fast As You Can.(pretty please)
Azrael-013 chapter 2 . 6/3/2003
Very interesting start, although I think that something must have gone wrong when you uploaded it because I'm getting squares instead of quotation marks on my screen. That's my only comment, and I think it hardly counts considering the story is quite good. Intriguing bunch of characters you have, and it's nice to see that the original guys are back as well.
Talena-Anne-Marie chapter 3 . 2/10/2003
Eh, it was OK, but I prefer my fanfiction to include the actual characters. Oh well. Keep it up.

"Joe? Joe...? ...I have to go to the bathroom." -Lucas

-Beatrix CoRal
yukito the NM Syndromer chapter 2 . 2/7/2003
Cool story! (Sorry for not reviewing. I've been away from the Persona section awhile) Please, please update soon!
yukito the NM Syndromer chapter 1 . 1/26/2003
Very interesting characters, I would like to see more of the story soon.