|Reviews for Over The Midnight Moon|
| FemaleFoxyFTW-2 chapter 9 . 3/25
I'll take your word for it. I can't complain about bullying at all in these stories, because I don't have any experience in getting bullied. Which I still find kind of weird, because I was definitely interested in the things that usually made targets for bullying.
| Ellixwolf chapter 9 . 1/6
I totally understand this being a coping thing and there's a thin line. When you think about Kit comes from a loving and should realize she matters and doesn't have to be afraid but because she does love her family a whole lot she doesn't want to worry.
There are some people who don't have a safe home or have parents who slight interest or only get involved so much before they lose interest or just don't care what happens.
When bullying becomes physical like the coffee now Jess threats she's a target and next. Edward wants to talk about being a danger maybe he should grow out of that angsty 17 yr old mindset. If he really thinks he's a monster then he should've ended his life before even coming to Forks.
| Ellixwolf chapter 8 . 1/6
Rosalie is annoying like I swear what's her real problem it can't be because she's jealous of them being human truly and in all seriousness Rosalie isnt even that beautiful.
| Ellixwolf chapter 7 . 1/6
Willa baby girl you are the saving grace Kit needs.
But in all realness Willa is great she's supporting and adores her friendship keeping it close and is playing it safe until really needed tho Id be slapping Lauren fake personality into another dimension.
| Ellixwolf chapter 6 . 1/6
Ugh Willa is honestly the sweetest. I can not agree more with Willa's comment about teachers and can honestly say 3 stick oit put of all of them even from "mentors" or coaches its sad really.
I feel like if Willa ever finds out about the texts but girls got tuition down pat she should maybe hint at it more to those who care about Kit.
Aw how cute was that her 1st date with Emmett. Kit's dad Blaine sounds perfect like dark humor handsome young overprotective and has the skills to be a detective I like it makes me feel like im watching a tv show.
| Ellixwolf chapter 5 . 1/6
Indigo my love you sound like a younger me Imma say something tho cause ain't no one looks at their phone should ever be too upset no one should be made fun of for no reason there lives don't affect yours unless you let it. Ashley Lauren and Katie are just jealous they don't get attention and are annoyed they aren't getting the football team themselves it seems like.
Momma should have better intuition one comment can mean a thousands words.
| Ellixwolf chapter 3 . 1/6
Nah bitch cause that dont fly with me. Yeah I have small circle of friends but if I notice even a single change Imma figure out whats wrong.
Funny how Lauren went out with everyone and had the audacity to call Kit a slut like sweetheart Kit isnt a mirror. Guys just like some nicer girls bot ones who know they can go back and hit and quick with a snap of their fingers when they feel like it. Sounds like Lauren and Jessica like orgies with the way they are honestly sharing guys.
Who's this Ashley chick she must not actually be all that if she's so knew. Katie is fickle wouldn't trust no one who has a personality that changes everytime some one promises her something.
Kit sweetheart I love you I do but you better step up change your number and block these girls better yet print them and report to police and get a restraining order on these evil soul sucking bitches.
| The Killing Quill chapter 1 . 5/5/2021
This app is the worst I can never see what I’m typing when I try to leave comments! I read this in 2-3 days and I’m sorry people felt like they had a right to complain about your characters. They were not nice about it but I think I know why they felt the way they did about Kit. A lot of people come to fic for escapism and each and every one of your characters were well rounded and real. I mean that as a compliment. I was interested in everyone’s lives, no matter how minor a part they played. They were honest, real and flawed. Their situational journeys throughout the story were engaging. I never once felt like anything you wrote was filler. It was world building and beautiful. Even though I was frustrated with Kit (and thus could EMPATHIZE with Willa for losing her temper because I would have done the same if someone I loved didn’t open up to me when I knew something was wrong!) and found the subject matter sad, I loved every minute I spent reading this. Thank you for sharing your story, which was really well written by the way, with us. I really appreciate all the time you must have spent on this project.
| Indigo chapter 15 . 3/24/2021
I know this story is complete and maybe no one bothers to look at these comments anymore but I wanted to speak up about the complaints you seemed to be getting about Kit. I feel like you are spot on with Kit's behavior and reactions to the bullying so much so that I can see my younger self reflected in her. Kudos to you for standing by your OC and thank you for portraying a realistic & relatable character! I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to read the rest.
| Angellah123 chapter 1 . 2/11/2021
I honestly don’t appreciate how weak she is .. it made the whole book suck because I was enjoying the book in the beginning damn... you should have made her have a little confident in herself
| MushroomGloomCorner chapter 26 . 12/20/2020
This is a lot more real than I'd thought it would be
| Junior-Einstein chapter 28 . 11/20/2020
Okay, first thing first: I love your story so far! It's just so... real, well if you overlook the supernatural aspect.
But this chapter was almost too much. The part with Lauren and the finger down the throat... I had to stop reading and take a deep breath. And I'm not ashamed to say that I had to cry. Big, fat tears. I myself am a victim of mobbing in my youth because of my weight. It left me with almost no self-esteem and even now after almost 16 years I still struggle with my self-worth.
So you have my respect to write a story about such a moving topic. I had to write something right now, I couldn't wait until I finished the story. But I HAVE to continue after this review!
Well then, onwards!
| FemaleFoxyFTW-2 chapter 35 . 11/6/2020
I know this is a serious chapter, but I can't help it, I laughed at that interaction.
"I can't breathe."
"You don't need to breathe."
| twibe chapter 1 . 9/30/2020
Ugh really, her parents act like she's 10!
| elievs chapter 46 . 5/17/2020
So, I guess I should begin this by saying that this story wasn't what I thought it'd be. I'm not saying that's bad, I'm just very surprised at the route you took by the end of it. I didn't think the bullying would go that far, and I didn't think she'd commit suicide because of it, but that's part of the reason you wrote the story, I guess.
Your writing does a good job of showing people that this type of bullying does exist, that people do try to take their lives because of it, and that this antagonization is a real problem. So many people (myself included) avoid this topic because of its sensitivity and the emotions that it can cause, so I applaud you for putting this out there and portraying it as it is (you could've very easily brushed the bullying off and returned to the fiction part of the story, and though at first I wished you'd done that, now I'm kinda glad you didn't).
I have to admit, I almost quit reading halfway through because the subject is a very touchy one for me and I mostly read fanfiction to get away from reality, but I'm happy I held through. The bullying - the parts where they pretended to be her friends, in particular - hit me very hard, because that used to be my life as well, so I have to say you portrayed that part very accurately.
At some point, I did get frustrated that she wouldn't stand up to those who taunted her, but I guess that was a bit personal for me. I got over my bullies a long time ago (but it did take some time - 6 years, in fact - for me to stand up to them), but seeing her suffer like I did brought some of those feelings of frustration and anger back. I, myself was never driven to commit suicide, but it's easy to see how one push in the wrong direction can have a person making that decision.
What I'm trying to say, I think, is that I appreciate having read this story, even if it wasn't what I was initially wanting and expecting. (Also, sorry-not-sorry for the long ass review )
Keep up the good work, you have a talent for writing