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Beautiful moment.
You’ve managed to convey so much through so little.
A lovely piece of writing. Thank-you.

Greatwork! I hope that you write more, because what you have so far is amazing. Live well!

Awwwww...this deserves Clawhauser-sized hugs! This was just too sweet and perfect!

Well this was like stumbling on a little hidden treasure. I really hope you decide to either continue this story or write more. You certainly have the talent for it.

More reviews for this, damn it people! It is adorable, the visuals are vivid, the fluff is fluffy. A rather nice read, I must say.

Very good. Very tight. It is a wonderful and tender mood that is struck at the end, ringing so much more true because of the wind-up. It isn't gooey and overdone, a constant will-they-won't-they. It's just as moment of pure affection, without any unnecessary fluff.

A very good introduction to the story. We learn somewhat about Judy & Nick's relationship, but not telling us so much to grasp the entirety of it. We are also left with many questions wanting to know more about the case. Who set the fire? Why did they do this to the victims? What is the case about? It makes people want to come back for more, and it's doing very well. I would think this was more of a mystery than drama, but either way it's still put together wonderfully. I can't wait for more chapters of this story.

This is great. I need more of this..