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![]() ![]() miss spelling in the summary,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wtf |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like many others, they are not brought to their logical conclusion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really enjoying this story and I realize that you probably already have it finished or close to having it finished however there is quite a few things that I you would enjoy directly adding as a chapter by chapter story edit update or even as a spin-off story series. wiki/Buffy_the_Vampire_Slayer_(franchise) wiki/Omniverse wiki/Omniverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse/Universe_Listing wiki/List_of_DC_Multiverse_worlds wiki/Multiverse_(DC_Comics) wiki/List_of_DC_Multiverse_worlds wiki/Category:Multiverse wiki/Werewolf wiki/Category:Marvel_Comics_vampires wiki/Inheritors_(comics) wiki/Vampire_(Marvel_Comics) wiki/Vampire wiki/Last_Great_Time_War wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/The_Doctor_(Earth-5556) wiki/Multiverse wiki/Intercompany_Crossovers wiki/Intercompany_crossover profile/rubicon/lists/marvel-intercompany-crossovers/56517/ wiki/Thread:1002804?useskinoasis wiki/Vampires wiki/Vampire wiki/Werewolf wiki/Category:Marvel_Comics_vampires wiki/Inheritors_(comics) wiki/Vampires Now Buffy the Vampire slayer can definitely have vampire hunting/slaying fun and your fanfiction version of the updated quantum mears can be said to have the ability to reach universes/realities/timelines that the regular quantum mears wouldn't be able to reach. And oh yeah there is also these to include into this story series: Stargate-Origins-Catherine-Ellie-Gall/dp/B07NSVJTD7 wiki/List_of_Stargate_literature wiki/Stargate_literature books/ slp/stargate-books/rpy4bq8n3ofn372 hubs/v/the-avengers wiki/Hypertime wiki/Secret_Wars wiki/Secret_Wars_(2015_comic_book) comics/events/270/secret_wars wiki/Crisis_on_Infinite_Earths wiki/Time_war wiki/Last_Great_Time_War hubs/v/doctor-who hubs/v/doctor-whothe-new-series hubs/v/the-worlds-of-doctor-who hubs/v/charlotte-pollard hubs/v/bernice-summerfield wiki/Last_Great_Time_War wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse I am really enjoying this story and I realize that you probably already have it finished or close to having it finished however there is quite a few things that I you would enjoy directly adding as a chapter by chapter story edit update or even as a spin-off story series. wiki/Buffy_the_Vampire_Slayer_(franchise) wiki/Omniverse wiki/Omniverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse/Universe_Listing wiki/List_of_DC_Multiverse_worlds wiki/Multiverse_(DC_Comics) wiki/List_of_DC_Multiverse_worlds wiki/Category:Multiverse wiki/Werewolf wiki/Category:Marvel_Comics_vampires wiki/Inheritors_(comics) wiki/Vampire_(Marvel_Comics) wiki/Vampire wiki/Last_Great_Time_War wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/The_Doctor_(Earth-5556) wiki/Multiverse wiki/Intercompany_Crossovers wiki/Intercompany_crossover profile/rubicon/lists/marvel-intercompany-crossovers/56517/ wiki/Thread:1002804?useskinoasis wiki/Vampires wiki/Vampire wiki/Werewolf wiki/Category:Marvel_Comics_vampires wiki/Inheritors_(comics) wiki/Vampires Now Buffy the Vampire slayer can definitely have vampire hunting/slaying fun and your fanfiction version of the updated quantum mears can be said to have the ability to reach universes/realities/timelines that the regular quantum mears wouldn't be able to reach. And oh yeah there is also these to include into this story series: Stargate-Origins-Catherine-Ellie-Gall/dp/B07NSVJTD7 wiki/List_of_Stargate_literature wiki/Stargate_literature books/ slp/stargate-books/rpy4bq8n3ofn372 hubs/v/the-avengers wiki/Hypertime wiki/Secret_Wars wiki/Secret_Wars_(2015_comic_book) comics/events/270/secret_wars wiki/Crisis_on_Infinite_Earths wiki/Time_war wiki/Last_Great_Time_War hubs/v/doctor-who hubs/v/doctor-whothe-new-series hubs/v/the-worlds-of-doctor-who hubs/v/charlotte-pollard hubs/v/bernice-summerfield wiki/Last_Great_Time_War wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse [report review for abuse] ConlonKeith chapter 84 . Dec 7 I am really enjoying this story and I realize that you probably already have it finished or close to having it finished however there is quite a few things that I you would enjoy directly adding as a chapter by chapter story edit update or even as a spin-off story series. wiki/Buffy_the_Vampire_Slayer_(franchise) wiki/Omniverse wiki/Omniverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse/Universe_Listing wiki/List_of_DC_Multiverse_worlds wiki/Multiverse_(DC_Comics) wiki/List_of_DC_Multiverse_worlds wiki/Category:Multiverse wiki/Werewolf wiki/Category:Marvel_Comics_vampires wiki/Inheritors_(comics) wiki/Vampire_(Marvel_Comics) wiki/Vampire wiki/Last_Great_Time_War wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/The_Doctor_(Earth-5556) wiki/Multiverse wiki/Intercompany_Crossovers wiki/Intercompany_crossover profile/rubicon/lists/marvel-intercompany-crossovers/56517/ wiki/Thread:1002804?useskinoasis wiki/Vampires wiki/Vampire wiki/Werewolf wiki/Category:Marvel_Comics_vampires wiki/Inheritors_(comics) wiki/Vampires Now Buffy the Vampire slayer can definitely have vampire hunting/slaying fun and your fanfiction version of the updated quantum mears can be said to have the ability to reach universes/realities/timelines that the regular quantum mears wouldn't be able to reach. And oh yeah there is also these to include into this story series: Stargate-Origins-Catherine-Ellie-Gall/dp/B07NSVJTD7 wiki/List_of_Stargate_literature wiki/Stargate_literature books/ slp/stargate-books/rpy4bq8n3ofn372 I am really enjoying this story and I realize that you probably already have it finished or close to having it finished however there is quite a few things that I you would enjoy directly adding as a chapter by chapter story edit update or even as a spin-off story series. wiki/Buffy_the_Vampire_Slayer_(franchise) wiki/Omniverse wiki/President_of_Earth wiki/Nova_Corps_(Earth-616) wiki/Green_Lantern_Corps wiki/Shadow_Proclamation wiki/Atraxi dc-multiverse/4015-43603/ wiki/Order_of_the_Custodians ( wiki/Three_Custodians wiki/MDZ_Research you can you the earth defence organizations of before the 13th Doctor if would like to) wiki/Omniverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse/Universe_Listing wiki/List_of_DC_Multiverse_worlds wiki/Multiverse_(DC_Comics) wiki/List_of_DC_Multiverse_worlds wiki/Category:Multiverse wiki/Werewolf wiki/Category:Marvel_Comics_vampires wiki/Inheritors_(comics) wiki/Vampire_(Marvel_Comics) wiki/Vampire wiki/Last_Great_Time_War wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/Multiverse wiki/The_Doctor_(Earth-5556) wiki/Multiverse wiki/Intercompany_Crossovers wiki/Intercompany_crossover profile/rubicon/lists/marvel-intercompany-crossovers/56517/ wiki/Thread:1002804?useskinoasis wiki/Vampires wiki/Vampire wiki/Werewolf wiki/Category:Marvel_Comics_vampires wiki/Inheritors_(comics) wiki/Vampires Now Buffy the Vampire slayer can definitely have vampire hunting/slaying fun and your fanfiction version of the updated quantum mears can be said to have the ability to reach universes/realities/timelines that the regular quantum mears wouldn't be able to reach. 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![]() ![]() ![]() The story has been denied to read list for a while, and I've been finally getting to it. And for the most part I've been really enjoying it. However :-). it's getting harder and harder to read because the viewpoint keeps on shifting without any kind of scene break or anything, repeating the same scene from different point of views, and having multiple flashbacks. It's really confusing for readers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be honest, my reaction to the end of this chapter was "Oh, yeah. 'and comes face to face with the end of days.' Dangit!" It's *incredibly* rare to see a crossover where we, as readers, get to explore the Colonies un-destroyed, and I was really getting into that. Couldn't you have just had SG-1 arrive kitted out for radiation just after the bombs stopped falling? Or arrived by ship just as the bombing was starting? Why tease something more appealing to me, only to steal it away? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the alternate history. I hope you’ll update this story again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() fmfan1980 waiting for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet at least three Cylons knew what they have done was wrong after all many think they are the best but there are darker thing out there in space. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter. yep willow, buffy and tara kinda messed this time, and frasier as good doctor she is was pissed for their irresponsive actions. the second part was interesting, finally the colonial cylons will learn about the furling cylon history. And the other cylons, feel the aftermath of their actions that could prbably cause their extinction, especially if Earth bring their advanced military support to colonials. Can't wait next chapter |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pity Tara wasn't so moral, she could've "touched" Willow and then Willow would have to explain the moaning noise recording on the video. Maybe a dream sequence? Perhaps when Tara is on the other side she can see auras of a different kind. For those with an active Ancient gene a subtle white glow, one with the gene but not active a pale yellow. Normal humans a bluish tint to their skin, anything Furling would have a darkness attached, especially magic users, and Slayers a demonic looking overlay. Goa'ulds, Jaffa, Tok'ra, a pinpoint where the symbiont is located. The Asgard, would look as grey on the otherside as they do in this dimension, the Nox a brilliant green. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Nitpick. Pellets? Or pallets?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() touching chapter with the scene between the adama family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa so Lee has seen his mother alive again once more but still their people have lost a lot that is for sure and will take a long time to re-build all they have lost. |