You were right about needing the relationship to move slower.

Five minutes after finding out Evelyn's gender and he already finds an excuse to kiss her, then shortly afterwards tricks Eve into dressing up and going out again rather than simply finding time to talk normally. It doesn't feel right either that Eve melts down THIS hard over the guy, either, because maybe I'm blind but even with Steve aimed at Peggy, Eve's relationship with the former was far more natural as a potential option.

There's also the fact that, from the moment you brought up Ed x Bucky in the A/N, it completely took over the story and progress everywhere else has ground to a halt.

As you say, she ought to be far more concerned about going home, ESPECIALLY after being given the circle to study from Edward. Which, if memory serves, was mentioned once since its acquisition and like most things has been dropped in favour of Bucky shipping.

That said, I don't explicitly dislike the idea of them together. It just feels like it happened way, waaaaaay too quickly.

Aww imagine if someone from his world was there AND recognized ed. Now that would create some chaos

I just wanted to say before I forgot but I’m happy I stumbled upon this series of fics cause the dinamic you have going on between Ed and Steve is too good. I hope you keep writing(if that’s what you want) and I’m definitely going to read the other parts of this story when I finish this one!

Now I want to see an ed who reverse engineered roy's gloves

alchemy would be rad in this sad it didn't work

I hope He/She gets their Alchemy back soon

Convenient choice of first meeting.

Looks great! I honestly hesitate when I see gender-change stories like this, but the writing is quite good here!

Gosh damn, this story was good. The writing, plot and characters were all superb. Good job!

OH
God this story was so good! that ending scene ahhhhhh
I cannot wait to read more!

As someone who generally dislikes gender swap stories and has surprisingly strong negative feelings towards first person narrators, I have only one thing to say:

How the fuck did you manage to get me emotionally involved this quickly?

Like, at the end of the first chapter (which is really short) I already knew I was gonna skip everything else I‘ve got planned for today, including dinner, just so I could keep reading this. How did you do that? I call witchcraft. No, seriously, I don‘t know where the story is gonna lead yet, but you got me hooked.

THIS WAS AMAZING, oml, I laughed and cried and went wow and uwu for the same story, I CAN'T, I LOVE IT

they calling each other Fullmetal was so cute

while i don't really the roller coaster of trauma, pain and basically lots of emotions. this is quite nice story. really, imagine if Evelyn has limbs created by Stark and perhaps from Vibranium? either way, she can go fullmetal now

OMILORD! This is one of the BEST and WELL WRITTEN fanfic's I've read on this site. I can not express the range of emotions this story has put me through or how much I've enjoyed and absolutely LOVED every word. Like, edkjfhfdf, words can't explain how awesome this author and much I appreciate her/his existence. I don't care how long the sequel takes to come out, I will wait till MY DYING DAYS TO READ IT.